Midna BE Story

[Goawaynow1]

Oh, punch me in the face and call me a retard! I'm so sorry I forgot to send you your old stuff like I was going to. I got some of it, then had a hard drive crash, and after that I forgot.

[MagicWritings]

Originally Posted by Lock

That sounds about right where you left off, my man.

Great! Thanks.

Originally Posted by Daichi Azure

welcome back and i'm sure everyone will be pleased to see your return to the community...-puts away his work uniform-

Heh heh, much appreciated.

Originally Posted by Goawaynow1

Oh, punch me in the face and call me a retard! I'm so sorry I forgot to send you your old stuff like I was going to. I got some of it, then had a hard drive crash, and after that I forgot.

No worries, man. That was then and this is now.

... Well, I wrote up a new Anju chapter. It's also the last (at least the last in which she plays a major role). I never realized I was so close to the end of that subplot. There's no process in it, but it's necessary for the continuation of the story.

It's my get-over-the-really-long-break piece, so forgive me for any weak writing and/or inconsistencies. Please do criticize.

Anyway, I'm dragging this on way too far. Here's the new chapter:

"Anju didn’t feel ready to talk about anything related to the past events, but she knew pretending to be asleep would yield no result. None of the three men seemed to be able to start the conversation, but eventually, the Professor began. ‘How do you feel, my dear?’

Anju sat up just a little bit, and looked him in the eye. ‘I feel fine, thank you,’ she said in a dreamy voice. A silence fell on the room again. ‘This isn’t getting anywhere!’ Kafei broke the silence. ‘She might feel fine, but the fact remains that this curse is going to be a problem!’

Mutoh shrugged. ‘Well, let’s get right to the blasted source of the problem! Through what object was my daughter cursed?!’ ‘Right!’ the Professor continued. ‘My dear, whenever you were cursed you should’ve felt a remarkable sensation of sorts.’

All eyes were on Anju, as the unspoken question was already obvious. Her mind raced in hopes of finding something to say. ‘I’m sorry.. my memory of the past days is rather vague…’ she said remorsefully. ‘But Anju, being cursed is not something you forget!’ shouted Mutoh.

The Professor and Kafei gave him an angry glance. ‘What?’ he muttered. ‘It’s not impossible that the curse is aware of the cornered position it’s in, and wants to prevent us from finding its origin at all costs,’ the Professor commented.

‘Well, that dirty trickery won’t work. This should be simple; let’s go through everything Anju has touched these past days,’ Kafei said with determination. ‘Stay here, Anju. We’ll find that curse if it’s the last thing I do!’

He walked out the door, followed by Mutoh who gave a worried glance to Anju and by the Professor who seemed deep in thought. As the door closed, Anju sat up again. She felt the incredible desire to look at herself in the mirror again.

What little clothes she had left didn’t hide anything of her newly gained beauty. As she gazed at her round hips and large breasts, and from the side, the curve in her back, she – to her own surprise- noticed she had fallen in love with her physical shape.

Her thoughts wandered into strange territory. ‘Maybe it wasn’t such a bad thing…’ a voice in her head said. ‘What wasn’t such a bad thing?’ she inquired herself in surprise. ‘The so-called “curse” and its effects,’ came the answer.

Anju marveled that she was discussing something with herself like this. ‘After all,’ the voice continued, ‘wouldn’t you please Kafei much more by being more… attractive?’ The thought had occurred to Anju before. ‘Maybe…’ she thought.

‘That considered, wasn’t it lucky you were working on that fateful evening? You would not betray your luck, now would you?’ the voice slyly added. ‘Lucky I was w--,’ she said out loud. ‘The bell!’ she felt a shiver down her bare spine as she finally remembered.

Anju realized she had been hearing a voice in her head, attempting to convince her of something. She listened, and indeed, she heard it again. ‘Now you remember, but you will not betray your luck, will you? For Kafei? You love him, don’t you?’

Anju saw through the strange voice at last, her mind clear as day. ‘I don’t know who or what you are, but you are most definitely not a part of me or my thoughts,’ she said to the voice. An angry silence fell. ‘You will regret this when you hear Kafei’s opinion,’ it said quietly,

‘We’ll see about that,’ Anju said once again. She had the curse backed into a corner, and she knew it. ‘Kafei!’ she shouted, turning to the door. She heard running feet outside the door, and then Kafei’s worried voice. ‘Anju? What’s the matter? Can I come in?’

Anju didn’t even care that she was a lot more than half naked, and said ‘yes, come in.’ Kafei stepped in, and looked surprised to see his wife in little clothes standing by the mirror. ‘Kafei, I remember now. I remember where the curse came from,’ she said.

Kafei was enthusiastic to see his wife had a clear memory again. ‘Anju, can you please tell me where?’ But at that moment, Anju felt a strange reluctance growing in her head. The words of the curse were folly, and she knew it, but they hadn’t left her confidence undamaged.

She was trying to find the words to ask the question burning in her head. ‘My dearest,’ Kafei said reading the question from Anju’s sad blue eyes, ‘you needn’t even ask. ‘To me, you were, are and will always be the most beautiful person in this world.’

‘The only thing this curse will do is make life harder for you, and that’s something I want to prevent at all costs. If I could stop this curse by climbing Snowpeak or swimming across the Great Bay, you know I would. Let’s stop this curse. Let’s overcome this obstacle together.’

They hugged and Anju felt her worries melt away. She was at a loss for words, but in a happy way this time. They shared a few moments in silence. ‘The bell… the one on the counter, which customers use to attend the inn staff. It holds the curse,’ Anju explained at last.

Kafei went and told the others, and soon, they had removed the bell from the counter. Anju had asked them not to show it to her again, but to destroy it as soon as they could. ‘Eaaaaaaarghhh!’ Mutoh shouted in frustration as he hit the bell with his hammer many times.

The bell didn’t even get dented by it. It simply made a sweet noise, almost as though it was mocking them. ‘Fortunately,’ the Professor said after Mutoh had thrown his hammer on the floor, ‘I came prepared for something like this.’

He took out a small cauldron from his bag, and placed the bell in it. Next, he grabbed a vial with a dangerous looking liquid in it. He opened it cautiously, and poured the entire bottle out on the bell. A complete silence fell in the room.

All of a sudden, the bell began making a deafening high pitched noise as it seemed to mingle with the liquid. It got increasingly louder until at least, silence fell once more. ‘That should’ve done it,’ the Professor said. ‘I’m glad I studied a lot after this curse first appeared.’

‘So, what was that dirty looking stuff?’ Mutoh asked. ‘A mixture of acids and ancient spells,’ the Professor answered with little motivation as though that was obvious from the start. ‘It’s extremely hard to make, but I’ll have a few bottles ready for if this happens again.’

Kafei and Mutoh gave the Professor their sincere thanks. ‘Do you need me to guide you back to your lab, old man?’ Mutoh asked. ‘That would be great. I’ve been too close to a heart attack too often today, and I can’t take any more attacks from wild beasts!’

Mutoh smiled, a rare event for the man. ‘You,’ he said, looking at Kafei solemnly. ‘You’ve looked after my daughter better than anyone else ever has. Thank you,’ he said. He turned without another word and walked out the door. ‘You’re welcome,’ whispered Kafei.

Kafei returned to Anju to tell her the good news. Together, they had overcome all problems and inner debates life brings along because they truly and honestly loved each other. Their lives returned to peace at last.

Incidentally, the Stock Pot Inn became extremely popular after these events and people came from far and wide to visit. The reasons travelers gave were all vaguely similar. ‘Well, we had heard of this beautiful girl with big… eyes.’"

[Lock]

Good return to form, MagicWritings. Let's see...We have these arcs..
-Midna
-Illa
-Nabooru
As for new victim suggestions:
Zelda
Ruto
Saria(I LOVE Saria BE/AP, OK?)
Impa(the Ocaraina of Time one)
Tetra
Malon

[Daichi Azure]

Lets go with Ruto since we don't get to see Zora's much since if you all remember Ruto is 'engaged' to Link from the OoT game's child segment

[MagicWritings]

Originally Posted by Lock

Good return to form, MagicWritings. Let's see...We have these arcs..
-Midna
-Illa
-Nabooru
As for new victim suggestions:
Zelda
Ruto
Saria(I LOVE Saria BE/AP, OK?)
Impa(the Ocaraina of Time one)
Tetra
Malon

AP, huh? Haven't done that in writing before, but sounds like a great experiment. No objections from anyone else following?

Originally Posted by Daichi Azure

Lets go with Ruto since we don't get to see Zora's much since if you all remember Ruto is 'engaged' to Link from the OoT game's child segment

If I'm going to do another Zora, I'm thinking there should be a twist to it. I'll think a little more about that later. I should be writing up a part in the main arc with Midna and Link now... might be even harder than finishing the Anju arc was.

[geno13]

AP, huh? Haven't done that in writing before, but sounds like a great experiment. No objections from anyone else following?

Sounds really interesting to me. Though this probably would be interesting to do to Tetra too.

[Daichi Azure]

true, but there's always Ruto becoming gaining dragon traits while affecting her the way it did Midna, plus Saria's trigger might be a bit tricky since one of her prized possessions is her Fariy Ocarina

[Forze]

A wonderful addition, and a lovely conclusion to the subplot, well done!

[keybladeknight]

GREAT to have you back i missed your great stories i was woundering if you can do zelda and malon together at the ranch plz

[cyero]

Oh thank God I was so depressed when it vanished.

Then I was all YAAAAAY when I saw this title!

[Lock]

DUH..Forgot about Lulu's being affected when I posted those ideas....
No objections with Saria. As for Ruto, maybe turn her into a human slowly?

[keybladeknight]

Originally Posted by Lock

DUH..Forgot about Lulu's being affected when I posted those ideas....
No objections with Saria. As for Ruto, maybe turn her into a human slowly?

IM UP FOR HIS idea throw in some ap,be,and ae(ASS EXPANSION) and everyone will B.E. happy see what i did there