A mixture of BE and horror... (story)

[gameguru8]

The story stops right when it gets interesting! The impossible situation that developped over the course of a day has come to light, and now here is where the author shows how well he can truly write. Above all else, I think the reaction of the world has to be believeable when a story with this kind of plot gets made.

I would definitely like to see this story reach its conclusion.

[Matsu-sensei]

Originally Posted by sh00rs1gn

Having read this piece I didn't really find anything erotic about it and I wasn't really horrified by it but I was more saddened.
Call me overly sensitive but the thought of a girl in a completely helpless situation upsets me, especially given it's resulted in the deaths of her friends and innocents.
I do hope this has a happy ending to it as this has actually haunted me somewhat over the past few days (that being said, going through a bit of a rough patch right now emotionally so it's probably related).
Would certainly love to read more, give your friend a pat on the back.

It's okay, I feel the same.

[sh00rs1gn]

I hate being the person to nudge this along and generally be a bit of a douche but has there been any development on this story Cold?
I really enjoyed it and am just wondering what the fate of the story is.

[coldasice]

Originally Posted by sh00rs1gn

I hate being the person to nudge this along and generally be a bit of a douche but has there been any development on this story Cold?
I really enjoyed it and am just wondering what the fate of the story is.

Nope, nothing yet. Dude's hard to get on, and he said he's been busy as of late.

[coldasice]

And finally, my friend finished writing the whole thing. I uploaded the completed version at the first post of the page.

To those who enjoyed the story, thank you. To those who were offended, I apologize.

[Muhznit]

Sweet ending. Tell your friend to get on here so I can figure out how exactly they froze even a portion of Alissa's breasts despite the threat of tendrils snatching them up

[Goluxas]

Author here. First, thanks everybody for your kind words. When cold first brought this idea to me, I accepted writing it as a challenge. I thought I'd only be able to write a few paragraphs before I ran out of synonyms for boobs and it got boring. Proved me wrong!

Sorry it took me so long to finish. Especially sorry to shoorsign and Matsu-sensei; I didn't mean to leave you hanging with bad feelings. If it's any consolation, it did have a happy ending! You just had to wait 7 months for it...

I'm actually kind of in the mood to do more BE stories now, though I'm gonna try to more strictly stick to the short story format, so I don't end up with another novella. Anyone got any ideas?

Originally Posted by Muhznit

Sweet ending. Tell your friend to get on here so I can figure out how exactly...

Long answer: Very carefully! No, just kidding. Kinda. The crew for the freezing job were given hazmat suits, which they then covered in mud, following the logic of "dirt blinds it." Then, they worked in two-person teams, with one person clearing the dirt away with compressed air while the other followed close behind with a coating a liquid nitrogen. Once that was done, they cut her out, and voila.

Short answer: I overlooked that detail...

[Muhznit]

Originally Posted by Goluxas

Author here. First, thanks everybody for your kind words. When cold first brought this idea to me, I accepted writing it as a challenge. I thought I'd only be able to write a few paragraphs before I ran out of synonyms for boobs and it got boring. Proved me wrong!

Sorry it took me so long to finish. Especially sorry to shoorsign and Matsu-sensei; I didn't mean to leave you hanging with bad feelings. If it's any consolation, it did have a happy ending! You just had to wait 7 months for it...

I'm actually kind of in the mood to do more BE stories now, though I'm gonna try to more strictly stick to the short story format, so I don't end up with another novella. Anyone got any ideas?



Long answer: Very carefully! No, just kidding. Kinda. The crew for the freezing job were given hazmat suits, which they then covered in mud, following the logic of "dirt blinds it." Then, they worked in two-person teams, with one person clearing the dirt away with compressed air while the other followed close behind with a coating a liquid nitrogen. Once that was done, they cut her out, and voila.

Short answer: I overlooked that detail...

...makes decent enough sense for a story where a giant pair of breasts eat things. As for short ideas, I suppose you could always go for the happy-sexy-fun-time stuff that appeals to pretty much every BE fetishist. :l