Midna BE Story - Page 14

Ryu_Knight · 08-05-2010

you know if they were smart they would get the gerudo to get some of the ingredients needed as to save them time, also it would be interesting if the curse were to curse one of the ingredients they needed and thus making the potion back fire on them but only after both of them drinking it

geno13 · 08-05-2010

O_O So it may make the curse effect them more?

Ryu_Knight · 08-05-2010

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Originally Posted by geno13

O_O So it may make the curse effect them more?

and maybe even controlling them

I figre that Midna should be the one to put the end to curse once and for all when the time is right, so I figure the curse would need... "followers" per say to maintain its powers and have it fight back

so Magic because of the nature of this story you can make what ever you want up, hell if you wanted you could give Midna new powers to end the curse if you wanted

Lock · 08-06-2010

Nice chapter, as always.

Daichi Azure · 08-06-2010

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Originally Posted by Ryu_Knight

and maybe even controlling them

I figre that Midna should be the one to put the end to curse once and for all when the time is right, so I figure the curse would need... "followers" per say to maintain its powers and have it fight back

so Magic because of the nature of this story you can make what ever you want up, hell if you wanted you could give Midna new powers to end the curse if you wanted

hai, but also at the same time needs more cowbell at the lon lon ranch...

Ryu_Knight · 08-06-2010

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Originally Posted by Daichi Azure

hai, but also at the same time needs more cowbell at the lon lon ranch...

maybe thats what the curse well effect next at the ranch

MagicWritings · 08-08-2010

The story moves on slowly...

Only seconds had passed before the Ranch’s entrance was in plain sight. Saria hadn’t been on a horse very often, and held on tight to Nabooru. It felt rather odd to feel her breasts squashed against someone’s back. She wondered if Nabooru noticed.

Only a few minutes had passed before Nabooru and her two bodyguards stopped their horses. They had arrived at the Ranch. They stepped down from their horses, Nabooru helped Saria down, and the four of them walked in.

They heard a commotion. People seemed to be arguing. They rushed along the short path and soon saw the whole ranch before them. Just a few yards away stood two men. One was tall, the other shorter and chubbier. They were talking to a figure black hooded figure.

Saria recognized the chubby, short man as Talon, Malon’s father and the taller one as Ingo, his only employee. They both had an iconic mustache and were armed with pitchforks. ‘For the last time, no, you ain’t seeing my daughter!’ they heard Talon yell.

‘But you don’t understand… I have something very important to tell her. I have a gift for her,’ the person who Nabooru knew as the Curse said. ‘Malon doesn’t know you. I went and asked her. And we ain’t letting any shady folks near her,’ Talon continued.

‘On my honor, I swear that I will give her something wonderful and life changing,’ the Curse said. ‘Is that so?’ Ingo said, finally speaking. ‘Well, hand the gift over and we’ll pass it on if it matters to you that much,’ he said cleverly.

None of the three seemed to notice that there were four women (three of which were armed) just some yards away. ‘Very well… I will return, but I can’t promise that you won’t be sorry for your stubbornness…’ the cloaked figure said, almost in a whisper.

‘Don’t bother coming back. All that’ll be waiting on you is pitchforks,’ Ingo yelled as the man turned and walked away. At that point, all three of them noticed the four women. The curse walked in their direction and Nabooru drew her scimitars.

‘Don’t move!’ she said, although she knew she couldn’t destroy this enemy with weapons. A laugh came from under the hood of the cloaked figure. ‘Isn’t it a pleasure to see women with heavy weaponry? Those two look pretty sharp,’ he said, apparently quite amused.

Nabooru rolled her eyes at the comment. ‘For an ancient curse, you sure enjoy cracking pathetic jokes,’ she said. Saria had been quiet, because the curse rather scared her. But she felt she had to ask something. ‘Why are you doing this to us?’ she yelled at the curse.

The curse turned to her and initially said nothing. ‘Ah, this one is rather lacking in terms of weapons. I have some business I need to attend to immediately, but after that you’ll have my… undivided attention, missy,’ he said.

Saria felt a shiver go down her spine, but she couldn’t just let this go by. ‘You haven’t answered my question! You can’t just go ruining lives at random. You have to have a purpose,’ the said. The curse seemed to keep staring at her.

‘Ruining lives?’ the curse said, with an emotion that they hadn’t heard from it before. It seemed more uncertain than it had ever done before. ‘Little missy, I’m not ruining lives. I’m improving them. That is my purpose,’ he said.

‘But this isn’t how you im— ’ Saria protested but the Curse interrupted. ‘Enough of that, missy. You will get my undivided attention when I’m done with more pressing matters. I will be seeing you later,’ he said, walking around the group and out of the ranch.

Talon and Ingo were still staring at the group of four women. Eventually, they walked in their direction. ‘More mystery guests for Malon?’ Ingo mocked. Saria wondered if Talon didn’t recognize her. He was looking at her face with a thoughtful expression.

Nabooru spoke. ‘Actually, we came to warn you and Malon about that person that just left. He’s a dangerous monster that can drastically change how women look even when it’s very weak, and do simply horrid things if it gets more power.’

Talon and Ingo exchanged a skeptical glance, but then Talon looked at Saria once more. ‘Miss, could it be that you are related to a girl named Saria? Her face is almost identical to yours, but you seem to be a little older… and…’ he glanced down to see his late wife’s dress.

‘Wha- how…?’ he said. ‘Malon mentioned that she borrowed one of my wife’s dresses to Saria. Is it true, then? You are Saria?’ Saria nodded shyly. ‘But you’re… she’s… well, that explains why Malon was so vague about it…’ Talon said.

Nabooru felt the situation only got more awkward, and felt she had to end it. ‘It’s a very long story, but that man that just left is the cause of this. He’s to blame for both her condition, and mine,’ she said, with some effort folding her arms in front of her breasts.

‘So that’s the “gift” he was talking about?’ Ingo said, quite shocked. ‘If I had known, he wouldn’t have left without a few holes in his robe,’ Talon said angrily. Nabooru was glad that everyone seemed to have a grasp on at least part of the situation.

‘Now, we are on a quest to defeat this person. But to do that, we need several ingredients to make a potion, and that includes Lon Lon Milk,’ Nabooru went on. Saria admired her charismatic and confident way of holding conversations, despite how she looked.

‘So, if we give you a bottle of Lon Lon Milk, you’ll be able to seriously mess up that evil man’s plans?’ Talon said, not quite sure what to think. Both Nabooru and Saria nodded. Talon decided to help out and gave them a bottle of Lon Lon Milk.

‘But won’t it go bad?’ Saria whispered in Nabooru’s ear. Talon apparently heard and said ‘Don’t worry. So long as you keep the bottle closed, it won’t spoil for weeks.’ Nabooru and Saria thanked him many times for his help, and got back on the horse.

They rode off, and promised they’d ‘seriously mess up that evil man’s plans’ as Talon put it. Soon, they felt the cool air of Hyrule Field in their faces again. ‘Thank the Goddesses we’re back here!’ said Nabooru. ‘All that explaining gets old fast.’

Saria was also glad to be out again. ‘What ingredient are we looking for next?’ she asked. ‘Well, let’s take on the more difficult ones first. Let’s see, a Zora scale…’ Nabooru read. ‘Oh, boy. That’s not going to be easy to come by… let’s head for Zora’s Domain,’ said Nabooru.

Suddenly, Saria gasped. ‘What is it?’ asked Nabooru. ‘The bottle of milk! Where is it? Did we forget it?’ Saria asked in panic. ‘Don’t worry, I have it. It’s safe,’ Nabooru answered. ‘Though I wish my pants had pockets so I could put it there…’ she added in a whisper.

‘Hmm?’ Saria said, almost falling asleep but hearing the whisper. ‘Oh, nothing,’ Nabooru said, looking down in her cleavage where the milk bottle was safely pushed in between her breasts.

geno13 · 08-08-2010

I hate to sound redundant, but... Lucky bottle.

Hm... I was thinking when and if Malon gets cursed, maybe it'll effect her a little differently from Cremia, maybe some lactation?

Ryu_Knight · 08-08-2010

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Originally Posted by geno13

I hate to sound redundant, but... Lucky bottle.

Hm... I was thinking when and if Malon gets cursed, maybe it'll effect her a little differently from Cremia, maybe some lactation?

very lucky bottle

Lock · 08-09-2010

Interesting chapet..What'll happen next?

Daichi Azure · 08-09-2010

dunno...but i do know that Malon had more of an affinity toward Epona than cows...

MagicWritings · 08-09-2010

Maybe it is time for Malon to get cursed. I'll think about it, anyway.
So, how would you guys want Malon to transform.

Mere BE + lactation?
Centaur TF?
Just BE? I'll follow the majority in this case.

08-05-2010	#157
Ryu_Knight Chop, Chop, Chop, Chop Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 547	Re: Midna BE Story you know if they were smart they would get the gerudo to get some of the ingredients needed as to save them time, also it would be interesting if the curse were to curse one of the ingredients they needed and thus making the potion back fire on them but only after both of them drinking it

08-05-2010	#158
geno13 Milky Meister Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 4,511	Re: Midna BE Story O_O So it may make the curse effect them more? __________________ DA Account (Stories and Commissions) - The Council Rp Forum - 3DS Friend Code: 3067 - 4780 - 9062

08-06-2010	#160
Lock Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 198	Re: Midna BE Story Nice chapter, as always.

08-08-2010	#163
MagicWritings Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 132	Re: Midna BE Story The story moves on slowly... Only seconds had passed before the Ranch’s entrance was in plain sight. Saria hadn’t been on a horse very often, and held on tight to Nabooru. It felt rather odd to feel her breasts squashed against someone’s back. She wondered if Nabooru noticed. Only a few minutes had passed before Nabooru and her two bodyguards stopped their horses. They had arrived at the Ranch. They stepped down from their horses, Nabooru helped Saria down, and the four of them walked in. They heard a commotion. People seemed to be arguing. They rushed along the short path and soon saw the whole ranch before them. Just a few yards away stood two men. One was tall, the other shorter and chubbier. They were talking to a figure black hooded figure. Saria recognized the chubby, short man as Talon, Malon’s father and the taller one as Ingo, his only employee. They both had an iconic mustache and were armed with pitchforks. ‘For the last time, no, you ain’t seeing my daughter!’ they heard Talon yell. ‘But you don’t understand… I have something very important to tell her. I have a gift for her,’ the person who Nabooru knew as the Curse said. ‘Malon doesn’t know you. I went and asked her. And we ain’t letting any shady folks near her,’ Talon continued. ‘On my honor, I swear that I will give her something wonderful and life changing,’ the Curse said. ‘Is that so?’ Ingo said, finally speaking. ‘Well, hand the gift over and we’ll pass it on if it matters to you that much,’ he said cleverly. None of the three seemed to notice that there were four women (three of which were armed) just some yards away. ‘Very well… I will return, but I can’t promise that you won’t be sorry for your stubbornness…’ the cloaked figure said, almost in a whisper. ‘Don’t bother coming back. All that’ll be waiting on you is pitchforks,’ Ingo yelled as the man turned and walked away. At that point, all three of them noticed the four women. The curse walked in their direction and Nabooru drew her scimitars. ‘Don’t move!’ she said, although she knew she couldn’t destroy this enemy with weapons. A laugh came from under the hood of the cloaked figure. ‘Isn’t it a pleasure to see women with heavy weaponry? Those two look pretty sharp,’ he said, apparently quite amused. Nabooru rolled her eyes at the comment. ‘For an ancient curse, you sure enjoy cracking pathetic jokes,’ she said. Saria had been quiet, because the curse rather scared her. But she felt she had to ask something. ‘Why are you doing this to us?’ she yelled at the curse. The curse turned to her and initially said nothing. ‘Ah, this one is rather lacking in terms of weapons. I have some business I need to attend to immediately, but after that you’ll have my… undivided attention, missy,’ he said. Saria felt a shiver go down her spine, but she couldn’t just let this go by. ‘You haven’t answered my question! You can’t just go ruining lives at random. You have to have a purpose,’ the said. The curse seemed to keep staring at her. ‘Ruining lives?’ the curse said, with an emotion that they hadn’t heard from it before. It seemed more uncertain than it had ever done before. ‘Little missy, I’m not ruining lives. I’m improving them. That is my purpose,’ he said. ‘But this isn’t how you im— ’ Saria protested but the Curse interrupted. ‘Enough of that, missy. You will get my undivided attention when I’m done with more pressing matters. I will be seeing you later,’ he said, walking around the group and out of the ranch. Talon and Ingo were still staring at the group of four women. Eventually, they walked in their direction. ‘More mystery guests for Malon?’ Ingo mocked. Saria wondered if Talon didn’t recognize her. He was looking at her face with a thoughtful expression. Nabooru spoke. ‘Actually, we came to warn you and Malon about that person that just left. He’s a dangerous monster that can drastically change how women look even when it’s very weak, and do simply horrid things if it gets more power.’ Talon and Ingo exchanged a skeptical glance, but then Talon looked at Saria once more. ‘Miss, could it be that you are related to a girl named Saria? Her face is almost identical to yours, but you seem to be a little older… and…’ he glanced down to see his late wife’s dress. ‘Wha- how…?’ he said. ‘Malon mentioned that she borrowed one of my wife’s dresses to Saria. Is it true, then? You are Saria?’ Saria nodded shyly. ‘But you’re… she’s… well, that explains why Malon was so vague about it…’ Talon said. Nabooru felt the situation only got more awkward, and felt she had to end it. ‘It’s a very long story, but that man that just left is the cause of this. He’s to blame for both her condition, and mine,’ she said, with some effort folding her arms in front of her breasts. ‘So that’s the “gift” he was talking about?’ Ingo said, quite shocked. ‘If I had known, he wouldn’t have left without a few holes in his robe,’ Talon said angrily. Nabooru was glad that everyone seemed to have a grasp on at least part of the situation. ‘Now, we are on a quest to defeat this person. But to do that, we need several ingredients to make a potion, and that includes Lon Lon Milk,’ Nabooru went on. Saria admired her charismatic and confident way of holding conversations, despite how she looked. ‘So, if we give you a bottle of Lon Lon Milk, you’ll be able to seriously mess up that evil man’s plans?’ Talon said, not quite sure what to think. Both Nabooru and Saria nodded. Talon decided to help out and gave them a bottle of Lon Lon Milk. ‘But won’t it go bad?’ Saria whispered in Nabooru’s ear. Talon apparently heard and said ‘Don’t worry. So long as you keep the bottle closed, it won’t spoil for weeks.’ Nabooru and Saria thanked him many times for his help, and got back on the horse. They rode off, and promised they’d ‘seriously mess up that evil man’s plans’ as Talon put it. Soon, they felt the cool air of Hyrule Field in their faces again. ‘Thank the Goddesses we’re back here!’ said Nabooru. ‘All that explaining gets old fast.’ Saria was also glad to be out again. ‘What ingredient are we looking for next?’ she asked. ‘Well, let’s take on the more difficult ones first. Let’s see, a Zora scale…’ Nabooru read. ‘Oh, boy. That’s not going to be easy to come by… let’s head for Zora’s Domain,’ said Nabooru. Suddenly, Saria gasped. ‘What is it?’ asked Nabooru. ‘The bottle of milk! Where is it? Did we forget it?’ Saria asked in panic. ‘Don’t worry, I have it. It’s safe,’ Nabooru answered. ‘Though I wish my pants had pockets so I could put it there…’ she added in a whisper. ‘Hmm?’ Saria said, almost falling asleep but hearing the whisper. ‘Oh, nothing,’ Nabooru said, looking down in her cleavage where the milk bottle was safely pushed in between her breasts.

08-08-2010	#164
geno13 Milky Meister Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 4,511	Re: Midna BE Story I hate to sound redundant, but... Lucky bottle. Hm... I was thinking when and if Malon gets cursed, maybe it'll effect her a little differently from Cremia, maybe some lactation? __________________ DA Account (Stories and Commissions) - The Council Rp Forum - 3DS Friend Code: 3067 - 4780 - 9062

08-09-2010	#166
Lock Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 198	Re: Midna BE Story Interesting chapet..What'll happen next?

08-09-2010	#167
Daichi Azure Fourm Firefighter Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 962	Re: Midna BE Story dunno...but i do know that Malon had more of an affinity toward Epona than cows...

08-09-2010	#168
MagicWritings Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 132	Re: Midna BE Story Maybe it is time for Malon to get cursed. I'll think about it, anyway. So, how would you guys want Malon to transform. Mere BE + lactation? Centaur TF? Just BE? I'll follow the majority in this case.