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New story: A Heavy Scent
Weight gain expansion story by praedatorius. More chapters to come.
http://praedatorius.deviantart.com/#/d3b07a9 By the way, feel free to point out grammar and spelling errors. Second Chapter http://praedatorius.deviantart.com/#/d3c10l7 Final Chapter http://praedatorius.deviantart.com/#/d3ec3pl
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Re: New story: A Heavy Scent
I liked it! I don't think I saw any errors, but now I can't wait to read chapter 2
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Re: New story: A Heavy Scent
Well done, definitely has me interested to read the rest.
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Re: New story: A Heavy Scent
Good! It seems that no matter how much proofread I always miss one or two. Glad you like the first chapter, by the way.
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Re: New story: A Heavy Scent
New chapter up.
http://praedatorius.deviantart.com/#/d3c10l7
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Re: New story: A Heavy Scent
The last chapter is up. Let me know how you liked the whole story.
http://praedatorius.deviantart.com/#/d3ec3pl
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