Curvaceous Cardinal Vices

vidgamer85 · 05-04-2011

Most definitely didn't expect that to happen at any point in the story (though I've never exactly been good at predicting what would happen), which is definitely a good thing. You know how to set up things in a way that defies the expectations without it being something completely out of left field (no Shyamalan weak twists here).

Now I say "Shit just got real" in a completely serious way though. Thus far each of the events with the girls has been formulaic, with a gradual drifting as Sid begins to catch on to something screwy happening, which is good as that way each chapter isn't a mad-lib of the previous one with different locations and vices. And the events here just makes everything take a huge turn in the plot and I foresee things picking up in terms of action and frequency of events.

05-04-2011	#11
vidgamer85 aka Dagwam Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 1,087	Re: Curvaceous Cardinal Vices Most definitely didn't expect that to happen at any point in the story (though I've never exactly been good at predicting what would happen), which is definitely a good thing. You know how to set up things in a way that defies the expectations without it being something completely out of left field (no Shyamalan weak twists here). Now I say "Shit just got real" in a completely serious way though. Thus far each of the events with the girls has been formulaic, with a gradual drifting as Sid begins to catch on to something screwy happening, which is good as that way each chapter isn't a mad-lib of the previous one with different locations and vices. And the events here just makes everything take a huge turn in the plot and I foresee things picking up in terms of action and frequency of events. __________________ Dagwam.deviantart.com Female muscle artist...well mostly.