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Process Fan
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 32
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Quite brilliant. I think your story is fabolously written. You can really see/read/hear that you spend a long time editing and it paid off! Nice choice of wording, good pacing, no cheap adverbs and just a cool flow. I love it. I also like that you take your time setting things up.
About Yogurcita's reading: I really don't like that name, Yogurcita. But that's taste I guess ![]() You can write and she can read. A nice combination ![]() P.S. And I really get more and more converted to audiobooks. A really great way to tell a story. |
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