Death knight to fertility knight - Page 2

Zilch · 01-19-2012

i really like the idea, but with your concept. i do like by the way. Im getting a bimbo part of her. I guess because its the puffy lips, and the shoes that she's wearing. I have read, too many stories that have alot of that in it. So maybe work on those. Also to me, if she was goddess than, she wouldn't have to show a whole of skin. It should show with they way she walks, how she looks at you and they way she will talk to you, is on how a goddess should act. I mean its your project so do what you want. Im just giving my opinion. Maybe work on her clothing design. I know that she is going, from death knight to fertility knight. But her clothing choice for the fertility part, is giving off a just fuck me attitude. I guess that she is showing a little to much skin. Im just giving you my feedback. So either you can take it into consideration, or just ignore me, lol. So good luck to you. Can't wait to see how this turns out.

01-19-2012	#13
Zilch Leecher Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 7	Re: Death knight to fertility knight i really like the idea, but with your concept. i do like by the way. Im getting a bimbo part of her. I guess because its the puffy lips, and the shoes that she's wearing. I have read, too many stories that have alot of that in it. So maybe work on those. Also to me, if she was goddess than, she wouldn't have to show a whole of skin. It should show with they way she walks, how she looks at you and they way she will talk to you, is on how a goddess should act. I mean its your project so do what you want. Im just giving my opinion. Maybe work on her clothing design. I know that she is going, from death knight to fertility knight. But her clothing choice for the fertility part, is giving off a just fuck me attitude. I guess that she is showing a little to much skin. Im just giving you my feedback. So either you can take it into consideration, or just ignore me, lol. So good luck to you. Can't wait to see how this turns out.