BESC Pranked with a Kiss

[EchoWing]

Originally Posted by Bobking11

I read it, much better than your last with a lot more focus on the expansion than story telling. Keep up the good work.

Thanks. Ironically, I wrote this long before I wrote 'As You Wish'. For some crazy reason, though, the later work got published first.

Still, I appreciate the critique. I'll keep it in mind with future works.