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Re: Mako's Collection: When Two Worlds Collide
Okay firstly I understand, however, I also have spoken to a huge amount of artists who do this because they want to - and ignore demanding comments (which means you can ignore me as you see fit :P)
Look I am not telling you I don't like the idea of a video - what I am saying is change the style so that it is either a video, or leave a comic to comic format. Hell why don't you offer the comics up as a donation purchase? I would buy it! If you are going to keep with video - the remove the text bubbles. Instead replace the text with voice acting - I am sure you will get many people dying to offer some voice acting for you for free (hell I would do it also!) Also expand your shots, sorry but you know better than I do about video editing, but your last video had no feel to it. There was too many close ups and not enough of the scene as a whole. So I didn't feel that the panels were really interconnected. But I do believe this is because I am frustratred over the text more than anything. Big thing for me is when I read a comic, I look at the scene in a glance for contexts, then read the text, then look at the art again to look over the scene. Your videos of your comics means you do not get that apprication for the scene, instead you are thrown into the detail, then get text, and then you have to remember the detail or go backwards in the video to look over it again. Might just be me - but I am trying to give contructive comments about the way I feel about them. I believe in all my heart you can do better - or even you can donation fund your comics also. I know I would be a buyer. Hugs. GD Quote:
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PS. I'd much rather see these in comic format then video myself. Also it's nice to see some big boobies finally!... though could be bigger :P
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05-19-2012 | #17 |
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I think if the word bubbles were separate from the art and were in the screen so we could see the art instead of having to focus so much on those it'd help the pacing. Other than that, fantastic work here
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Yeah make. Pay for some drilling - its so great )
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Hmm, definitely an interesting little twist there. I haven't heard that name in the Star Wars universe for years, though...
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Excellent job (as always), Mako!
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