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[conrail3483]

I loved the story, hope you continue to write.

[hexen]

I'm on a cliff... hanging.

[Dog_Girl_Kari]

Originally Posted by hexen

I'm on a cliff... hanging.

Good...

[ryansgalant]

Just finished your story....from one author to another, that was quite exceptional. The build up was long, some might argue to long, but the story was quite good with descriptions and leaving just enough to the readers imagination. I'd love to read a sequel to such a well written story.

[Dog_Girl_Kari]

Originally Posted by ryansgalant

Just finished your story....from one author to another, that was quite exceptional. The build up was long, some might argue to long, but the story was quite good with descriptions and leaving just enough to the readers imagination. I'd love to read a sequel to such a well written story.

Well, I was trying to write a full story, not just a TF story. So diving head first into the TF was not the intent, I wanted it to have a rather extended period before an actual change.

Thanks for the feedback though, I'll keep that in mind for future endeavors. ^_^

[ryansgalant]

Originally Posted by Dog_Girl_Kari

Well, I was trying to write a full story, not just a TF story. So diving head first into the TF was not the intent, I wanted it to have a rather extended period before an actual change.

Thanks for the feedback though, I'll keep that in mind for future endeavors. ^_^

I feel as though I mispoke. I like the build up. I typically write in a similar fashion, and it drives a lot of my readers nuts. I think it's essential to have a respectable amount of buildup before you get to the TF, otherwise it's just furry harlequin fodder. (not that there's anything wrong with that. I was quite impressed with how few typos/grammar issues there were, and the idea and flow was quite well thought and laid out. I know I hate hearing other people asking me this, but.....Do you have a sequel in mind or in the works?

You seem like the kind of author that I'd love to do a collaboration with when I have more time. I will be keeping an eye on you since I enjoy your works. Just out of curiosity, were you planning on posting the most recent photomanips, and story on DA, or were those exclusive to this site? I really liked the most recent blond photomanip as it is exactly what I had in mind when writing a story about someone that's quite similar in appearance.

[Dog_Girl_Kari]

Originally Posted by ryansgalant

I feel as though I mispoke. I like the build up. I typically write in a similar fashion, and it drives a lot of my readers nuts. I think it's essential to have a respectable amount of buildup before you get to the TF, otherwise it's just furry harlequin fodder. (not that there's anything wrong with that. I was quite impressed with how few typos/grammar issues there were, and the idea and flow was quite well thought and laid out. I know I hate hearing other people asking me this, but.....Do you have a sequel in mind or in the works?

You seem like the kind of author that I'd love to do a collaboration with when I have more time. I will be keeping an eye on you since I enjoy your works. Just out of curiosity, were you planning on posting the most recent photomanips, and story on DA, or were those exclusive to this site? I really liked the most recent blond photomanip as it is exactly what I had in mind when writing a story about someone that's quite similar in appearance.

haha, I doubt I'll post those to deviantart, I'll post the story there once I get it finished. and as for a sequel, I'm planning on added a lot more chapters.

[The_Nameless_One]

That last pdf was really nice, good story and good pics. Great work

[Dog_Girl_Kari]

Originally Posted by The_Nameless_One

That last pdf was really nice, good story and good pics. Great work

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[Dog_Girl_Kari]

A bit of an update on that story.

[hexen]

Kari it's kinda weird to say but it feels really like you understand how a werewolf works or is supposed to. The way you describe the stuggle and the way you build up your scenes is so vivid that I'd believe you already whent through a change yourself!
Maybe I'm exagerating but who cares, story is good and want more of it, although it seems that the whole werewolf deal was supposed to be a point of conflict with Em's student life but now it's getting a little bit too much focus... I don't know, I'm sure you have a climax built up.

[Dog_Girl_Kari]

Chapters 1 & 2 are done now