Race Change

[Sparks]

Originally Posted by catfish27

Extremely tantalizing with the setup there -- if you ever do get inspired to write more of this story, I would be very interested.

To explain why I didn't make a full story out of this one, it's due to the fact that, while I liked the setup and mechanic of this, I really couldn't come up with a good conflict, or really a middle section other than some good bits for the protagonist herself with one of my very lacking ideas for a possible conflict. It lacked something to really drive a plot plausibly, I guess. Maybe if I ever get hit with inspiration and come up with something good I'll continue onto this, but it's not likely at this point.

It's kind of a shame, since I did really like the setup and mechanic of it. Hopefully it might influence something I do in the future, but I'll stop rambling now.