Beach Blanket Beauties Part Two

[Janus Steel]

I purchased this yesterday and like all the dreamtales stuff the art is good. I love Palcomix better than Bojay's work (I have trouble telling Bojay faces apart). But I thought storywise this one wasn't as tight.

Without giving away spoilers to those who haven't read this I think that this could have been a much tighter story by just giving us a few pages extra detail. And maybe I'm saying that because I'm being hypercritical for my own stories and in context have turned it onto other stuff. Right now there are two plot holes that just kind of irk me. I know... fetish material and plot holes are kind of hand and in hand.

Now I wouldn't mind paying 12 dollars for a longer tighter story from you Dreamtales, I so far have bought just about all your work. But After going through some of the newer stuff, Highschool Confidential, Booby Battle and this one of the 3 new ones Booby Battle is my favorite because it is, while no words, more detailed in how things work and we're not left wondering how an AR gun can do more than AR/AP.

Just my Two Cents, ultimately I'll buy just about anything you produce but I thought I'd give you feedback.