New artist, looking for critique

[MageOmega]

Originally Posted by Dog_Girl_Kari

I agree that the rib cage bothers me a bit, but the breasts are the thing that stand out the most, in that position they would not be perkily in front of her. They almost appear to be attached at her neck, rather than at the sternum.

I was trying to replicate the pose here seen in figure 7(from memory, i probably should have used a reference. ah well.)
http://yogawisdomforeveryday.files.w...-namaskar2.jpg

But thank you both for the input/critique! I will keep a more observant eye on the arms and ribcage next time i draw.

[sodacat]

Ah, yeah, the multiboob would explain it. A different viewpoint would show that better unless this was part of a sequence.

From the looks of that yoga image it looks as if her weight is resting on her hips before being pulled back by her legs and distributed between her hands and feet. In your image the weight is distributed between her hands and her right knee, and her hands really don't look like they are holding her up.

There is an improvement in the face over the images you posted in october.