Rachel's Kitten

Mr. Nibz · 01-12-2013

Hey all, back with a new story in tow and some pretty awesome art work to boot! On a whim I commissioned Everruler to do an anthro Displacer Beast TF for me as seen here.

Got inspired to do an aftermath story, Rachel's Kitten. Its set in the Jaqueline's choice Universe. Hope you like it.

Mr. Nibz · 01-12-2013

Uh, it posted the story and not the pics. Also sharing the story's aftermath by Little Napoleon!

frice2000 · 01-14-2013

Very nice indeed. Thanks a lot for sharing it! Perhaps a bit too dark for my tastes though.

Mr. Nibz · 01-14-2013

Dark? How so? Second time I've heard this so your not alone but I just don't understand it. Everything was consensual heck that was the challenge for writing this story.

Thanks for reading!

frice2000 · 01-15-2013

Everything was consensual yes, but the story universe as a whole is rather dark. Rachel there didn't want to be the beast she had been forced to be, society looked down rather heavily on them and for good reason. The fae see humans as play toys and are usually pretty successful as making them their toys apparently. So all that together makes it a dark universe. Stories can have a relatively positive ending and your characters can have loving relationships in this universe which they almost all seemingly do. But the reason the characters start that journey is usually pretty sad. Now if both the characters in this story had consented to their transformations and they had glamours to avoid detection much different a tone. None of that's to say it's a bad story in anyway. Totally isn't and is at pay to read quality. It's just darker then I like. Prefer willing or at the least characters who get revenge on their transformers when you actually have a character journey and development. If this was just pure porn with no characterization I wouldn't care. But to your credit even with the heavily explicit material was still interesting characters therein.

Anyway if I could make a request could we see fae culture through their own eyes at some point? With a fae as the main protagonist of a piece? Seems like it'd be an interesting perspective.

Mr. Nibz · 01-23-2013

I will definitely have to do that at somepoint.

01-14-2013	#3
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: Rachel's Kitten Very nice indeed. Thanks a lot for sharing it! Perhaps a bit too dark for my tastes though.

01-14-2013	#4
Mr. Nibz Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 103	Re: Rachel's Kitten Dark? How so? Second time I've heard this so your not alone but I just don't understand it. Everything was consensual heck that was the challenge for writing this story. Thanks for reading!

01-15-2013	#5
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: Rachel's Kitten Everything was consensual yes, but the story universe as a whole is rather dark. Rachel there didn't want to be the beast she had been forced to be, society looked down rather heavily on them and for good reason. The fae see humans as play toys and are usually pretty successful as making them their toys apparently. So all that together makes it a dark universe. Stories can have a relatively positive ending and your characters can have loving relationships in this universe which they almost all seemingly do. But the reason the characters start that journey is usually pretty sad. Now if both the characters in this story had consented to their transformations and they had glamours to avoid detection much different a tone. None of that's to say it's a bad story in anyway. Totally isn't and is at pay to read quality. It's just darker then I like. Prefer willing or at the least characters who get revenge on their transformers when you actually have a character journey and development. If this was just pure porn with no characterization I wouldn't care. But to your credit even with the heavily explicit material was still interesting characters therein. Anyway if I could make a request could we see fae culture through their own eyes at some point? With a fae as the main protagonist of a piece? Seems like it'd be an interesting perspective.

01-23-2013	#6
Mr. Nibz Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 103	Re: Rachel's Kitten I will definitely have to do that at somepoint.