Candide's Commission Contest: Free 5-page Comic

Soccermom · 02-12-2013

Page 1: A husband/wife(30's) are relaxing in a sauna naked, chatting happily.
Page 2-4: A green mist fills the air, and the man is TGed and then shrunk over the course of the three panels into a 2ft tall appropriately proportioned woman, and the woman is TGed and then ARed into a 12-18 year old boy. Both are utterly shocked as this occurs.
Page 5: They run to each other, and the former wife sweeps the tiny woman into his arms. The scene leaves the implication that they're still continuing their changes, and getting younger/smaller after the comic ends.

(Word Count 97)
((Age left with a wide range, because you said both no underage/post-pubescent. I interpreted this as the original transformee doesn't start as a child, but included the 18 there if I was mistaken. I'd prefer to see the younger version however, as it adds to the gravity of the situation.))

Crash Ichimonji · 02-13-2013

A plain-figured girl at jungle ruins picks up a gold grail with a green liquid in it. She suddenly sees a large komodo dragon running at her. Panicked, she spills the cup on herself and falls. The lizard pauses at her, then tears all her clothes off. It mates with her, her skin becoming grey-brown, a long tail sprouting, her hands and feet becoming claw-like, her eyes become lizard-like, her boobs and hips expanding. As this all happens, she goes from frightened to being in ecstasy. They embrace lovingly in the last panel post-coitus, the girl with a pregnant belly.

(100 words exactly)

And here are the girl's before and after pics.

02-12-2013	#1
Soccermom Going against the flow Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,965	Re: Candide's Commission Contest: Free 5-page Comic Page 1: A husband/wife(30's) are relaxing in a sauna naked, chatting happily. Page 2-4: A green mist fills the air, and the man is TGed and then shrunk over the course of the three panels into a 2ft tall appropriately proportioned woman, and the woman is TGed and then ARed into a 12-18 year old boy. Both are utterly shocked as this occurs. Page 5: They run to each other, and the former wife sweeps the tiny woman into his arms. The scene leaves the implication that they're still continuing their changes, and getting younger/smaller after the comic ends. (Word Count 97) ((Age left with a wide range, because you said both no underage/post-pubescent. I interpreted this as the original transformee doesn't start as a child, but included the 18 there if I was mistaken. I'd prefer to see the younger version however, as it adds to the gravity of the situation.)) Last edited by Soccermom; 02-12-2013 at 08:45 PM.