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Process Disciple
Join Date: Apr 2006
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Re: BE for Valentine's Day, story by praedatorius
10/10 Will probably read again sometime when I'm not rushed and comment properly.
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Fetish Writer
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: New Jersey
Posts: 321
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Re: BE for Valentine's Day, story by praedatorius
I'd appreciate that. Thanks, by the way, for pointing out those errors in the text. This is what happens when you've been writing non-stop for three days. XD
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