More general 'increased beauty'

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Originally Posted by The Goggles

Question to... Uh... Everyone here, what would you like to see in my next little attempt at producing something?

Thanks for asking! Some plot/writing elements that I appreciate greatly are:

• Establishing how the woman is unhappy with her "before" looks. Scrutinizing herself. Comparing herself to others.
• Her anticipation when she realizes that she can become beautiful; that the magic (or whatever) actually works. Maybe after tasting a small sample, getting a minor or temporary improvement.
• Her desire, or even obsession, with reaching this goal.
• Showing that she goes out of her way to achieve this; she doesn't just get it by accident. She works hard to unlock the secret.
• She only gets a moderate improvement at her first try, but she tries to increase its potency with every time.
• She gets to influence / be specific about what aspects of herself she wants improved.
• The procedure involves something physical, something touching. Not just "tingle, poof" or saying a magic phrase, but maybe bathing or dipping herself in something, or having a lotion rubbed all over her body?
• She discovers with satisfaction how men find her more attractive now.
• Admiring herself, both naked and clothed.
• Suddenly getting laid much more than she has in years.
• She shares the secret with a lady friend who is equally hungry for it, and pleased with the effects.
• It turns out there is a limited amount of beauty available, and they're not so fond of sharing it sisterly anymore.
• Maybe they become rivals, or become rivals with someone else who has also unlocked the secret to improve herself.
• It turns out the effects wear off at the most embarrasing times, and they get desperate to get "back in the loop". Maybe the effects actually slingshot into increased ugliness every time?

Some aspects of the IB I like to pay extra attention to are:

• Firming, lifting and shaping up of breasts and butt
• Weight loss, slimming, stomach shrinking and flattening
• Rejuvenation, feeling healthier, skin & flesh tightening, muscle toning

Feel free to be inspired!