Alpha Demo!

[frice2000]

Asks for your name. Info in Window already says your name is John before input.

"Suddenly you warm and hear an odd noise.

You reach up to remove the collar only to find that the latch is fused and try as you may you can't remove it.

First part of quote doesn't seem to make sense. What warms? Needs more description. Second why would I suddenly try to remove the collar when I've simply walk into the bathroom? Is that what warmed?

As you begin to fade from conciousness

Spelling. Word choice.

You groggely open your eyes

Spelling

After that quote and clicking continue got an error regardless of what room I go into. Unrecognized Guid format. Quote of full error text here: http://pastebin.com/DPuFgKBr . This error happens every time I put on the collar and then try to exit to any room. However, if I try to exit the room before putting on the collar I can advance.

So...is your PC naked the entire time she's talking to Tanya now? Seems...awkward. But character image obviously has clothes on which don't look baggy.

Suddenly you can hear a scratching noise and you look to see your new name being insribed on the tag, it now reads,

After this why do I have to ask her again. Since I obviously can't leave the room, before I do why not just have it auto advance to next conversation point?

off in though you realize that

thought

Medicine cabinet right click menu only says "k". Clicking on it does nothing.

Can fill glass of water in Kitchen. But can't drink it.

Well on first play through after finding bug got a long tounge and some fur. Can't figure out how to advance it any more then that. Expect that is it for the beta. Also hope when talking to Tanya up in her room noticed a couple things. No dialogue for the other two options other then embrace it yet. Expect that'll come later as this is just alpha. Also when I went back when I clicked the cancel option she gave me the ring not before.

I do like how if you pick the same name as you had before she just names you Bitch.

Overall nice start. Obviously not done in a lot of places but looks like it'll have interesting elements for sure. Hope my rambling set of bug/spelling/grammar reports/corrections help a little.