Vocal Woman Shrinking Video demo

qzar9999 · 05-02-2013

Could be interesting... I'll keep an eye on this.

vid · 05-02-2013

I've been keeping some track of your stuff for a while and I appreciate what you do. If I could make a suggestion though, I feel like a lot of your work lacks focus - I'm never really sure what's going on and the little stories you make for them (all centered on some kind of transformation virus I think?) I find confusing.

With this clip in particular, I like that you added vocals, but I think the change should be slower instead of up and down and the pitch change more gradual. The free program Audacity features a timed changer that can automatically adjust things like pitch and speed gradually.

I really like that you're working with a variety of material and would love to see it get even better. There's a lot of potential for some truly great stuff. Thank you and keep up the good work.

stringchange · 05-02-2013

Quote:

Originally Posted by vid

I've been keeping some track of your stuff for a while and I appreciate what you do. If I could make a suggestion though, I feel like a lot of your work lacks focus - I'm never really sure what's going on and the little stories you make for them (all centered on some kind of transformation virus I think?) I find confusing.

With this clip in particular, I like that you added vocals, but I think the change should be slower instead of up and down and the pitch change more gradual. The free program Audacity features a timed changer that can automatically adjust things like pitch and speed gradually.

I really like that you're working with a variety of material and would love to see it get even better. There's a lot of potential for some truly great stuff. Thank you and keep up the good work.

Focus is an issue for sure. I've got a pretty good over all story worked out but haven't had time to drill down and make it clear.

basically its a technology that people discover that allows women to shape shift, then it starts getting crazy, then there's a prohibition and things go wild.

The next shrink video I'll take your notes into account. I'll have to check out audacity. I use adobe audition and don't love it.

thanks, I appreciate the kind words and advice.

05-02-2013	#1
qzar9999 Purveyor of Porn Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Gallifrey Posts: 7,071	Re: Vocal Woman Shrinking Video demo Could be interesting... I'll keep an eye on this. __________________ Tace atque abi. Plenus stercoris est. Editor/Writer, Shrink Fan and Transform Fan Check out Interweb Comics on Twitter or Instagram for all kinds of fun, sexy stuff covering multiple fetishes! Cezar's Comix - New 11/15! http://www.e-junkie.com/cezarscomix My eBooks at amzn.to/1CDS22w or bit.ly/1BZqaCp Quidquid Latine dictum altum videtur. My DeviantArt. Full list of my stories here. How I feel when certain users post anything.

05-02-2013	#2
vid Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 284	Re: Vocal Woman Shrinking Video demo I've been keeping some track of your stuff for a while and I appreciate what you do. If I could make a suggestion though, I feel like a lot of your work lacks focus - I'm never really sure what's going on and the little stories you make for them (all centered on some kind of transformation virus I think?) I find confusing. With this clip in particular, I like that you added vocals, but I think the change should be slower instead of up and down and the pitch change more gradual. The free program Audacity features a timed changer that can automatically adjust things like pitch and speed gradually. I really like that you're working with a variety of material and would love to see it get even better. There's a lot of potential for some truly great stuff. Thank you and keep up the good work.