Jitensha sw comics

tjlemke · 05-21-2013

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Originally Posted by vid

Or we should just ask Cluedog to do more, if she's available.

I'm curious if I haven't asked this yet - does story matter to anyone here? I get what you guys say about filler, but I've seen plenty of stories that feature nothing but fetish content implemented with the creativity of checking off a list - "OMG she's a like a goddess!" / "I'm going to crush you like a bug with my butt/hand/foot." / "I'm a giantess, which automatically means I'm a murdering psychopath."

If you don't mind a plug (I'm the author of Power Patrol 1+2), one of the coolest comics I've seen was from GtsFan called "Green Goddess Inn". It has tiny fae-men interacting with normal busty women (including a BBW), but has such an amazing sense of tone and atmosphere with entertaining characters and dialogue I honestly wonder if it could become mainstream.

In any case, I understand that balancing story and content can be a bitch, but I feel fetish content can be more potent when the people it's happening to are recognizable instead of just placeholders for the action.

What do you guys think?

For me its not so much that there is a story, the plotline is like the border around my TV. I realize it's there, it serves a functional purpose, and taking it out would ruin the TV. I don't don't like storyboards, it's just when there are 3-4 pages of setup (getting to know the main characters and their environment) 1-2 pages of process and the rest of the 18 pages is a mix of sex and sw interaction with their surroundings I feel it could have been better spread out. I'd keep the story in, I'd just have it 5 pgs of setup, 7-8 pgs of process, 3 pgs of sw interaction, and 0-2 left for sex and whatnot. Stories have been fine, it's just the lack of process that dissapoints me. The closest I felt fully satisfied was when I read the Sailor Moon sw series. They had a somewhat decent amount of sw. (Jit if you read this don't get the wrong idea! I love your art and comics, I'm just voicing my opinion on the perfect comic IMO)