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[aresx]

wow this is awesome. I'm not even a fan of pig tf's

[civis-rasa]

Originally Posted by Kantomaster1111

Sounds like you're moving in the right direction with fur and tails! I personally like to see transformed women but if you're planning males as well just make sure either the cat, fox, and/or wolf is a woman. Your work is excellent and much better than my own. Keep it up!

I haven't really thought about working with male models right away, but I probably will at some point. I appreciate the female form, but that doesn't mean the male form is ugly and I can see artistic benefits for creating male hybrids in the future.

Regardless I'm glad you enjoy my first piece and I hope my future projects continue to please.

[civis-rasa]

Originally Posted by Grievous

Looks fantastic to me! and this is considering I am not a big fan of pigs :P
Honestly I think you hit the jackpot in how you managed to blend the ears and the hoof'ed fingers into actually making them feel they ARE her's. I am not sure about the edges of the nose's tip however, think they are a bit too "orange-ish", at least thats how they look on my side of the screen.

Regardless, great work, looking foward to what else you can brew

I've been hearing "I'm not a fan of pigs" a lot surprisingly. I guess, I don't see the problem with them and personally find them cute. But, then everyone has their preferences and I respect yours. To that end, I hope my next project appeals closer to your preferences and that my skill continues to please.

Thank you for the feedback, I agree with you and I've adjusted the image a little, if you have time take another peek and let me know what you think. I'm always looking to improve.

[civis-rasa]

[QUOTE=Drachen;709203]Considering you're "trying to get a feel" for it, that's some damn fine work. The only odd thing I noticed was the tusks. They look kind of flat and not quite like they are coming out of the tooth line. Good stuff, in any case.

I've taken note of that, but I don't really see that issue. But perhaps my perception is off, I've made a small change in attempts to resolve the problem you see. If you can, please take another look a let me know if you agree or not.

Regardless, I appreciate and value your opinion. Thank you.

[civis-rasa]

Originally Posted by Coal

First thing I noticed was a teeth, right then I saw it wasn't a snout copy/paste and call it a day. Everything else looks fantastic to! =)

Hmm, do the teeth stick out in a negative way?

I think the snout took several hours easy or shaping, shading, reshading, tweaking and then adding textures. so, certainly not a cut and paste job. Thank you for noticing and I'm very happy that you enjoyed the rest.

[slayer1]

Originally Posted by civis-rasa

I've been hearing "I'm not a fan of pigs" a lot surprisingly. I guess, I don't see the problem with them and personally find them cute. But, then everyone has their preferences and I respect yours. To that end, I hope my next project appeals closer to your preferences and that my skill continues to please.

Thank you for the feedback, I agree with you and I've adjusted the image a little, if you have time take another peek and let me know what you think. I'm always looking to improve.

Most popular would be canine or feline

[civis-rasa]

Originally Posted by Crash Ichimonji

A common issue I've seen with TF's dealing with animals with cloven hooves (pigs, cows, sheep, goats, etc) is that the artist just merges the middle and index finger as well as the ring and pinky fingers each as a thick finger making the hand resemble the hands the Teenage Murant Ninja Turtles are depicted as having (shape-wise).

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Attached is a picture of what I meant in my post.

I see what you mean now, interesting. The idea isn't bad to me, but I can see how it could be overused and not as appealing in some respects. Still, I like the idea of including some of the hoof/claw into the hand where possible.

[The_Nameless_One]

Loving the pig transformation. Looks very well done.

Am actually quite wondering what your take on a donkey transformation would be, with the ears, buckteeth and tail.

[civis-rasa]

Originally Posted by The_Nameless_One

Loving the pig transformation. Looks very well done.

Am actually quite wondering what your take on a donkey transformation would be, with the ears, buckteeth and tail.

I appreciate it, I think your the first who actually likes pig/human hybrids. Is there anything in particular you enjoyed?

Donkeys? I'm considering doing one at some point. Mostly likely I would include long ears, a rope like tail with a tuft on the end. Perhaps a short, semi muzzle with enlarged teeth and hoof like hands. But, I don't want to go overboard. This is a hybrid after all, they need to retain their human aspect and personality as well, that's very important. I'm trying to do more than just glue animal features on someone.

[Drachen]

Originally Posted by civis-rasa

I've taken note of that, but I don't really see that issue. But perhaps my perception is off, I've made a small change in attempts to resolve the problem you see. If you can, please take another look a let me know if you agree or not.

I see your modifications, but the issue is still the same. I'll explain more by PM if you wish, but if you don't see it, it might just be my perception or even my taste. Like I said, the work is very good overall.

I like pig TFs as well, so that makes two of us, I guess...