Cuddlebeams Proofreading & Content Hub! - Page 4

vincent_richter · 08-08-2013

I'll take a crack at wrapping up this weekend. I've kinda had some real life shit getting in the way, but I want to try to finish this for you.

vincent_richter · 08-10-2013

I think you're going to like Chapter 3, though I did kinda lose my stream of thought after the first few paragraphs (should be obvious where, thus why I consider this a first effort).

I'll edit this post as soon as I've finished revisions.

Chapter 3

Edited with a better stopping point.

vincent_richter · 08-11-2013

And here is Chapter 4.

I liked a good portion of your writing here, so it's largely intact. It still feels like we're missing some story points, but the story *is* unfinished, and I'm hardly one to make assumptions on another's brainchild.

CuddleBeam · 08-13-2013

-What is missing in the story?

-The revisions and little masterful edits are amazing. I love them. I was reading them and I couldn't help myself from smiling stupidly. Dang. Thanks a lot!

-I'll get more CuddleCow uploaded when I'm back from Germany.

CuddleBeam · 09-11-2013

Next Part of Cuddlecow and another, new story involving a Succubus. Similar premise to Cuddlecow (dang I like the concept too much)

How do I upload things to the dropbox? D: I can open it and stuff but I can't upload.

vincent_richter · 09-11-2013

Quote:

Originally Posted by CuddleBeam

Next Part of Cuddlecow and another, new story involving a Succubus. Similar premise to Cuddlecow (dang I like the concept too much)

How do I upload things to the dropbox? D: I can open it and stuff but I can't upload.

I think I have to email you an actual share link, rather than just the folder link.
Care to PM me any address at all?

CuddleBeam · 09-11-2013

Done

08-08-2013	#37
vincent_richter ミンナニナイショダヨ Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: St. Canard Posts: 6,091	Re: Cuddlebeams Proofreading & Content Hub! I'll take a crack at wrapping up this weekend. I've kinda had some real life shit getting in the way, but I want to try to finish this for you. __________________ If you're not outraged, you're not paying attention.

08-10-2013	#38
vincent_richter ミンナニナイショダヨ Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: St. Canard Posts: 6,091	Re: Cuddlebeams Proofreading & Content Hub! I think you're going to like Chapter 3, though I did kinda lose my stream of thought after the first few paragraphs (should be obvious where, thus why I consider this a first effort). I'll edit this post as soon as I've finished revisions. Chapter 3 Edited with a better stopping point. __________________ If you're not outraged, you're not paying attention. Last edited by vincent_richter; 08-11-2013 at 12:49 AM.

08-11-2013	#39
vincent_richter ミンナニナイショダヨ Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: St. Canard Posts: 6,091	Re: Cuddlebeams Proofreading & Content Hub! And here is Chapter 4. I liked a good portion of your writing here, so it's largely intact. It still feels like we're missing some story points, but the story is unfinished, and I'm hardly one to make assumptions on another's brainchild. __________________ If you're not outraged, you're not paying attention.

08-13-2013	#40
CuddleBeam DO THE IMPOSSIBLE Join Date: Dec 2012 Location: Spain Posts: 872	Re: Cuddlebeams Proofreading & Content Hub! -What is missing in the story? -The revisions and little masterful edits are amazing. I love them. I was reading them and I couldn't help myself from smiling stupidly. Dang. Thanks a lot! -I'll get more CuddleCow uploaded when I'm back from Germany. __________________ Thank you everyone! My Deviantart: http://cuddle-beam.deviantart.com/ Last edited by CuddleBeam; 08-13-2013 at 11:50 PM.

09-11-2013	#43
CuddleBeam DO THE IMPOSSIBLE Join Date: Dec 2012 Location: Spain Posts: 872	Re: Cuddlebeams Proofreading & Content Hub! Done __________________ Thank you everyone! My Deviantart: http://cuddle-beam.deviantart.com/