New Story, Good for Your Figure

Laughingman · 02-04-2014

It was a little different than I expected, but I did like it for the most part. The slime girl thing certainly came out of nowhere, not really sure about that. My biggest complaint would be the people and their reactions. Didn't really feel real to me, and they were all so grouchy, lol. Still, that was probably what you were going for, lol. I liked it and it had good distinct characters.

02-04-2014	#2
Laughingman Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 374	Re: New Story, Good for Your Figure It was a little different than I expected, but I did like it for the most part. The slime girl thing certainly came out of nowhere, not really sure about that. My biggest complaint would be the people and their reactions. Didn't really feel real to me, and they were all so grouchy, lol. Still, that was probably what you were going for, lol. I liked it and it had good distinct characters.