Angela's first day (My new series.)

[zdarkness]

Ah, alright then. And I noticed from the tags that this is apparently actually 3DCG and not MMD. Apparently the program has changed a lot since I tinkered with it last a couple years back. I don't recall there being model scaling.

[Kevin_Generic]

Originally Posted by zdarkness

Ah, alright then. And I noticed from the tags that this is apparently actually 3DCG and not MMD. Apparently the program has changed a lot since I tinkered with it last a couple years back. I don't recall there being model scaling.

There still isn't, I do that stuff custom outside the program by messing around with proportion files hah.

Originally Posted by Captain Ash

That is a really nice comic.
Maybe you could work a little bit more on the face expression but I like it how she loosens into her uniform.

Captain Ash

Thanks, glad you like the clothing effects. And can you be a little but more specific on what it is about the expressions you think need more work?

[Captain Ash]

Originally Posted by Kevin_Generic

Thanks, glad you like the clothing effects. And can you be a little but more specific on what it is about the expressions you think need more work?

Page 1 &2 are good!
Page 2 where the shrinking starts she has the face expression between "noticed that she is shrinking" and worrying.
So far so good!

Page 3 ,however, has just the "okay, I'm shrinking" face expression.
Someone who is shrinking and who never experienced something like that before, should be worried, confused, puzzled, or a a mix of all these feelings.
She knows its happening but know that she can't do anything about it.
Or she is not capable to understand the situation.

At page 3 bottom pic, her eyes are shut.
For me it looks like that she is pissed off rather than being embarrassed.

These are my suggestions what could be improved.
Hope it was helpful.

Greetings

Captain Ash

[Kevin_Generic]

Originally Posted by Captain Ash

Page 1 &2 are good!
Page 2 where the shrinking starts she has the face expression between "noticed that she is shrinking" and worrying.
So far so good!

Page 3 ,however, has just the "okay, I'm shrinking" face expression.
Someone who is shrinking and who never experienced something like that before, should be worried, confused, puzzled, or a a mix of all these feelings.
She knows its happening but know that she can't do anything about it.
Or she is not capable to understand the situation.

At page 3 bottom pic, her eyes are shut.
For me it looks like that she is pissed off rather than being embarrassed.

These are my suggestions what could be improved.
Hope it was helpful.

Greetings

Captain Ash

Yeah I think the problem is I didn't want to zoom in too much to make the shrinking more apparent, so the facial expression is not as clear as it could be. I was hoping the high soft curved eye brows would look less like an annoyed expression but I guess not? xD Thanks for the feed back though, next time I'll be way more prepared.

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Also, page 5! http://fav.me/d7e3das

My first time doing a hand held shrunken girl, I hope I got it right. xD