From Dead To Alive (Age Progression Short Story)

The AP Ninja · 07-23-2014

First some autor notes:
- This is a short story involving Age Progression and Age Regression
- I have planned writing 3 Rounds with two parts each
- I have also a Spanish version written as my mother language is Spanish
- My mother language is Spanish as I just said...so there might be some grammar issues...please notify me about those

Round 1 - Hannah
Part 1 - Her greatest wish

Hannah got home after another boring day of school…she had PE class and thus she wore her loosy grey tracksuit in order to hid their classmates her little problem: Hannah had a great inferiority complex about her little breasts and the ones finding out about them won’t stop laughing at her…It’s not strange that Mimi, from the next door class, despite of being as flat as her and much more small, mocked at her too…

The thirteen-year-old had a pretty decent body for her age, and atractive shoulder length black hair and freckles on her chicks that according to her cheering mum made her sexier… but she just couldn’t stop thinking about how flat she was…She desperately needed to shake off this endless thoughts. She turned on her videogame console and started playing her favourite videogame: Dead Or Alive.

And what did you expect? The female fighters from that game have voluptous bodies…developed frames that she would really like to possess. Usually she would have just played two or three rounds for letting her rage go…but today she was really afflicted. She just entered the character select screen and stared like hipotized to her favorite character’s portrait…Hitomi…She wished so hard to be like her…as strong…as beautiful…as…busty…

Just then she felt a slight tingling in her arm…it seemed that as she thought that word her entire body had heated on…but the tingling persisted…so she took off her jacket to examine her arm…revealing a simple and a bit oversized white tank top.

She saw both arms and hands stretching…become more mature…her bitten fingernails growing again…her fingers growing slender and more luxurious…and from her unexercised arms muscle started forming…bulging and hardening…it was muscle enough to have a pair of attractive arms…Then the same happened to her legs…growing curvier and sexier as they became tighter and tighter againgst her trousers. She couldn’t believe what she was feeling…she heated up more and started breathing heavily.

Her curveless waist started growing up tensing itself…her waist lines appeared as if some was drawing them with its finger little by little making Hannah start moaning with her yet childish voice…her curves accentuated even more as her body grew up to adult height. Then her butt started rising up and becoming firmer every second…suddenly it made her panties tight hard to her vagina and thus she groaned intensely as she blushed with a guilty yet exciting feeling…but her voice was strangely more mature and sexier but not enough to compete with Hitomi’s .

Then Her breasts started palpitating as her nipples erected…Hannah, unable to contain her deep pleasure further, started groaning again…with each scream her voice matured a little bit more and so did her breasts…tightening with each scream to her training bra until it snapped free…

She then turned back to see her hair turning brown and stroking her back softly as it went down to her waist…she then giggled as she realised who she was becoming…her face then shifted with her freckles slowly vanishing…she closed her eyes and raised her head up letting the transformation make its grand finally…fulling her lips.

As she looked in the mirror she didn’t see Hannah anymore...but Hitomi…besides her former outfit had tight in such a way that she actually looked like she was cosplaying her…a very convenient and fake "clotheshifting"...now she looked gorgeous and no man would resist her…Just then an alarm-like sound made her look to the TV again…she saw a warning message written in red capital letters: 3 HOURS

She thought that was the time she had for enjoying this new body…so with her being home alone that day, she headed with her tight clothes to the street with nobody to stop her..she had 3 hours to show the world the new Hannah…

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Hannah was really enjoying her “tour” of the city…the high school sourroundings had lots of children at this hours…usually irresponsible children that instead of doing their homework they spent the whole day out…Hannah was also supposed to be doing them…but she quickly let her guilt pass as she saw to children all over the street looking at her like they’ve seen some sort of angel…13-year-olds like her and even much older kids…Hannah, realising about this, waddled even more while moving…

As she passed the highschool sourroundings she started seeing much older people as she kept on walking…like as olde as her new body probably…some of them succumbed her charms and started following her…she was wandering rather than walking, she wasn’t going really anywhere…she just wanted to enjoy her new body…as she kept on walking more and more people followe her…it looked just as she has just become the Hammelin flautist of men…she could even hear some of them pushing each other for getting closer to her…like if they wanted to ask her to go out but never really had the guts to do it.

Just then she saw a moving mask shop without attendant…it had a hand mirror, probably for the clients to look themselves with the masks put on…but she used it to look at her new face…which ironically it was kinda like mask…then what she saw made her tremble…like a ghost apparition that wanted to carry all she wanted…her freckles were appearing little by little on her chicks again…

Hannah then noticed what was going to happen…in a matter of seconds…she would become the same curveless Hannah again and would make the scene of her life before such a big crowd of “fans”…she had to think something..and FAST…Like some sort of instinct she kissed the mirror and threw it to the other side of the street.

-The one that catches that mirror will do so with my heart and love- She said, turning back to the crowd with a shining smile.

Then they all rampaged against the position where the mirror landed, like charging bulls. Taking advantage of the rampage Hannah rushed to a nearby backstreet and ran as fast as she could…The street had no exit…but it had a dark corner where she could go back to normal safe.

She was already a little bit shorter than normal when she got there…as she was feeling tired she sustained her back in the wall…she could feel her butt’s chickbones slowly reducing and becoming limper against the cold touch of the wall as her legs also shortened…she could seee how her trousers becoming wider as they swallowed half her feet again.

There was a time in which her fragile legs couldn’t stand her adult torso’s weight anymore and thus she slipped to the floor “sitting down” letting a tiny “Ouch” escape her lips. Then the tingling came to both her hands…she could see how her slender and gracious fingers retracted themselves little by little and the same ocurred to her arms…as they became shorter her fighter biceps slowly sank down the flesh resulting in an innocent preteen arms.

She gazed down her stomach as it started palpitating…first losing her waist lines and softening little my little as no trace of muscle was there to be found…her whole torso narrowed and lost its curves…becoming more and more child-sized…at the same time her breasts started deflating with each breath-No, no, no…- she said with each stealing breath…each “No” sounding more and more childish each time…she was recovering her old voice…

She then closed her eyes as her entire face was the one changing now…she could feel her chicks widening and softening as her chin rounded and her lips became less poutier…then her freckles appeared completely and her long brown hair started darkening and falling apart until it recovered her original shape…She was the good old (and flat) Hannah again…The problem was now how the hell was she going to go back home.

Round 1 - Fin

bstgate · 07-25-2014

Great start! As much as age progression, this also has some nice Increased Beauty.

The AP Ninja · 07-25-2014

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Originally Posted by bstgate

Great start! As much as age progression, this also has some nice Increased Beauty.

omg...Has someone just commented? This is a miracle! Thanks

I have the first two rounds already written in Spanish, my mother language...it will took a while until they are fully translated

Mr GorpThorp · 07-25-2014

This was very good

Thanks for sharing, made me wish for more!

The AP Ninja · 07-25-2014

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Originally Posted by Mr GorpThorp

This was very good

Thanks for sharing, made me wish for more!

Thanks! As I said before there WILL be more...but for Hannah it will be the next part what seals her fate XD

godleydemon · 07-26-2014

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Originally Posted by The AP Ninja

omg...Has someone just commented? This is a miracle! Thanks

I have the first two rounds already written in Spanish, my mother language...it will took a while until they are fully translated

You might try messaging MaxAP, same mother language and a godly amazing writer of attribute theft, age progression, age regression, ect.

The AP Ninja · 07-28-2014

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Originally Posted by godleydemon

You might try messaging MaxAP, same mother language and a godly amazing writer of attribute theft, age progression, age regression, ect.

Thanks godleydemon good to hear that there are some good writers with my mother language out there....

BTW second part written in the first post, everyone

godleydemon · 07-29-2014

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Originally Posted by The AP Ninja

Thanks godleydemon good to hear that there are some good writers with my mother language out there....

BTW second part written in the first post, everyone

Kind of strange for a story to fast forward 3 hours like that. But not to bad really. If you want, this would be a really great chance to go back through and flesh out some more of the story. Introduce more characters and conflicts. The transformations are pretty darn well laid out. But the story and characters are a little hard to get behind, because there isn't much there to them.

The AP Ninja · 07-30-2014

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Originally Posted by godleydemon

Kind of strange for a story to fast forward 3 hours like that. But not to bad really. If you want, this would be a really great chance to go back through and flesh out some more of the story. Introduce more characters and conflicts. The transformations are pretty darn well laid out. But the story and characters are a little hard to get behind, because there isn't much there to them.

You are pretty much right...
This character didn't have much to tell about but I dont introduce her as I should... I didn't want to add much more plot to it because it was getting a bit long...and about the three hours I just wanted to make you see that she was so enchanted with her new body that she didn't even know how far she was going...in fact she doesn't even go back home...
But given that this perjuices the story rather than beneficiate it
I will probably check this story again and probably introduce more plot

Thanks for the opinion and the cheers

godleydemon · 07-31-2014

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Originally Posted by The AP Ninja

You are pretty much right...
This character didn't have much to tell about but I dont introduce her as I should... I didn't want to add much more plot to it because it was getting a bit long...and about the three hours I just wanted to make you see that she was so enchanted with her new body that she didn't even know how far she was going...in fact she doesn't even go back home...
But given that this perjuices the story rather than beneficiate it
I will probably check this story again and probably introduce more plot

Thanks for the opinion and the cheers

Yeah no problem, I help out Max sometimes as well. Just offering advice and constructive crit on some of it. I think I even edited a couple of his stories as well. Can't wait to see some more of your writing and how much better you get

07-23-2014	#1
The AP Ninja Process Master Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 645	From Dead To Alive (Age Progression Short Story) First some autor notes: - This is a short story involving Age Progression and Age Regression - I have planned writing 3 Rounds with two parts each - I have also a Spanish version written as my mother language is Spanish - My mother language is Spanish as I just said...so there might be some grammar issues...please notify me about those Round 1 - Hannah Part 1 - Her greatest wish Hannah got home after another boring day of school…she had PE class and thus she wore her loosy grey tracksuit in order to hid their classmates her little problem: Hannah had a great inferiority complex about her little breasts and the ones finding out about them won’t stop laughing at her…It’s not strange that Mimi, from the next door class, despite of being as flat as her and much more small, mocked at her too… The thirteen-year-old had a pretty decent body for her age, and atractive shoulder length black hair and freckles on her chicks that according to her cheering mum made her sexier… but she just couldn’t stop thinking about how flat she was…She desperately needed to shake off this endless thoughts. She turned on her videogame console and started playing her favourite videogame: Dead Or Alive. And what did you expect? The female fighters from that game have voluptous bodies…developed frames that she would really like to possess. Usually she would have just played two or three rounds for letting her rage go…but today she was really afflicted. She just entered the character select screen and stared like hipotized to her favorite character’s portrait…Hitomi…She wished so hard to be like her…as strong…as beautiful…as…busty… Just then she felt a slight tingling in her arm…it seemed that as she thought that word her entire body had heated on…but the tingling persisted…so she took off her jacket to examine her arm…revealing a simple and a bit oversized white tank top. She saw both arms and hands stretching…become more mature…her bitten fingernails growing again…her fingers growing slender and more luxurious…and from her unexercised arms muscle started forming…bulging and hardening…it was muscle enough to have a pair of attractive arms…Then the same happened to her legs…growing curvier and sexier as they became tighter and tighter againgst her trousers. She couldn’t believe what she was feeling…she heated up more and started breathing heavily. Her curveless waist started growing up tensing itself…her waist lines appeared as if some was drawing them with its finger little by little making Hannah start moaning with her yet childish voice…her curves accentuated even more as her body grew up to adult height. Then her butt started rising up and becoming firmer every second…suddenly it made her panties tight hard to her vagina and thus she groaned intensely as she blushed with a guilty yet exciting feeling…but her voice was strangely more mature and sexier but not enough to compete with Hitomi’s . Then Her breasts started palpitating as her nipples erected…Hannah, unable to contain her deep pleasure further, started groaning again…with each scream her voice matured a little bit more and so did her breasts…tightening with each scream to her training bra until it snapped free… She then turned back to see her hair turning brown and stroking her back softly as it went down to her waist…she then giggled as she realised who she was becoming…her face then shifted with her freckles slowly vanishing…she closed her eyes and raised her head up letting the transformation make its grand finally…fulling her lips. As she looked in the mirror she didn’t see Hannah anymore...but Hitomi…besides her former outfit had tight in such a way that she actually looked like she was cosplaying her…a very convenient and fake "clotheshifting"...now she looked gorgeous and no man would resist her…Just then an alarm-like sound made her look to the TV again…she saw a warning message written in red capital letters: 3 HOURS She thought that was the time she had for enjoying this new body…so with her being home alone that day, she headed with her tight clothes to the street with nobody to stop her..she had 3 hours to show the world the new Hannah… ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hannah was really enjoying her “tour” of the city…the high school sourroundings had lots of children at this hours…usually irresponsible children that instead of doing their homework they spent the whole day out…Hannah was also supposed to be doing them…but she quickly let her guilt pass as she saw to children all over the street looking at her like they’ve seen some sort of angel…13-year-olds like her and even much older kids…Hannah, realising about this, waddled even more while moving… As she passed the highschool sourroundings she started seeing much older people as she kept on walking…like as olde as her new body probably…some of them succumbed her charms and started following her…she was wandering rather than walking, she wasn’t going really anywhere…she just wanted to enjoy her new body…as she kept on walking more and more people followe her…it looked just as she has just become the Hammelin flautist of men…she could even hear some of them pushing each other for getting closer to her…like if they wanted to ask her to go out but never really had the guts to do it. Just then she saw a moving mask shop without attendant…it had a hand mirror, probably for the clients to look themselves with the masks put on…but she used it to look at her new face…which ironically it was kinda like mask…then what she saw made her tremble…like a ghost apparition that wanted to carry all she wanted…her freckles were appearing little by little on her chicks again… Hannah then noticed what was going to happen…in a matter of seconds…she would become the same curveless Hannah again and would make the scene of her life before such a big crowd of “fans”…she had to think something..and FAST…Like some sort of instinct she kissed the mirror and threw it to the other side of the street. -The one that catches that mirror will do so with my heart and love- She said, turning back to the crowd with a shining smile. Then they all rampaged against the position where the mirror landed, like charging bulls. Taking advantage of the rampage Hannah rushed to a nearby backstreet and ran as fast as she could…The street had no exit…but it had a dark corner where she could go back to normal safe. She was already a little bit shorter than normal when she got there…as she was feeling tired she sustained her back in the wall…she could feel her butt’s chickbones slowly reducing and becoming limper against the cold touch of the wall as her legs also shortened…she could seee how her trousers becoming wider as they swallowed half her feet again. There was a time in which her fragile legs couldn’t stand her adult torso’s weight anymore and thus she slipped to the floor “sitting down” letting a tiny “Ouch” escape her lips. Then the tingling came to both her hands…she could see how her slender and gracious fingers retracted themselves little by little and the same ocurred to her arms…as they became shorter her fighter biceps slowly sank down the flesh resulting in an innocent preteen arms. She gazed down her stomach as it started palpitating…first losing her waist lines and softening little my little as no trace of muscle was there to be found…her whole torso narrowed and lost its curves…becoming more and more child-sized…at the same time her breasts started deflating with each breath-No, no, no…- she said with each stealing breath…each “No” sounding more and more childish each time…she was recovering her old voice… She then closed her eyes as her entire face was the one changing now…she could feel her chicks widening and softening as her chin rounded and her lips became less poutier…then her freckles appeared completely and her long brown hair started darkening and falling apart until it recovered her original shape…She was the good old (and flat) Hannah again…The problem was now how the hell was she going to go back home. Round 1 - Fin Last edited by The AP Ninja; 07-28-2014 at 02:52 PM. Reason: Grammar issues

07-25-2014	#2
bstgate Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 327	Re: From Dead To Alive (Age Progression Short Story) Great start! As much as age progression, this also has some nice Increased Beauty.

07-25-2014	#4
Mr GorpThorp Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 402	Re: From Dead To Alive (Age Progression Short Story) This was very good Thanks for sharing, made me wish for more! __________________ Gorp. Thorp.