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A doodle ended up going further than expected
My first time attempting this so ive used a lot of help... so its really....
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Re: A doodle ended up going further than expected
Very well done, maybe you can have her shirt ripping. Keep up the good work
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Re: A doodle ended up going further than expected
If you want to make it more detailed, the bottom end of the shirt should move up as the breasts expand. Otherwise, good job.
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03-25-2014
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Re: A doodle ended up going further than expected
Thanks for the feedback! Im going to mess around with it a bit...
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11-18-2014
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Re: A doodle ended up going further than expected
So I updated it a bit. And by that I mean I just added colors... Im also going to do what chriskim019 recommended, but this was just to get the ball rolling. I have been procrastinating waaay too much!
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11-18-2014
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Re: A doodle ended up going further than expected
Looks great! I would only suggest using a lighter color shirt, so that the outlines stand out more. You could also add shadowing under the bust that way
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11-18-2014
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Re: A doodle ended up going further than expected
Good stuff!
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11-18-2014
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Re: A doodle ended up going further than expected
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11-18-2014
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Re: A doodle ended up going further than expected
Done.... wrong?
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11-19-2014
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Re: A doodle ended up going further than expected
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I've also posted another one. I was playing around with the frames and made what I think is a neat effect... AND it stretched it without adding new frames (cheap). Anyone have some animation tricks/shortcuts? Im really new at this. Also... once I get things a bit more "finalized, I think im going to re-do the frames. See here: http://i.imgur.com/zaxwa8T.png My excuse for this mess is that I originally made this when I screwed up my foot and I was pretty out of it and on painkillers
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11-19-2014
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Re: A doodle ended up going further than expected
The white works better because it allows the shadow to tell more of the tale.
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11-28-2014
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Re: A doodle ended up going further than expected
Love the expression on her face when her hair and breasts change. Make it look more like she's feeling it.
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