Transformation Madness 2

blackshirtboy · 12-06-2014

I haven't started reading it yet, but the layout on the story pages are awful. If you're releasing another one of these I would recommend something a little more traditional, or at least a better font, because right now they're just solid walls of text.

The illustrations look good though!

Mmm... Daikon · 12-06-2014

Are these just stand-alone images, or are there sequences?

Matador · 12-06-2014

[QUOTE=Mmm... Daikon;741515]Are these just stand-alone images, or are there sequences?[/QUOTE

Each TF has a 3 image sequence.

Matador · 12-06-2014

Quote:

Originally Posted by blackshirtboy

I haven't started reading it yet, but the layout on the story pages are awful. If you're releasing another one of these I would recommend something a little more traditional, or at least a better font, because right now they're just solid walls of text.

The illustrations look good though!

Thank you for the suggestion. I will try to do something on the next one to spruce up the presentation a bit.

12-06-2014	#1
blackshirtboy Process Master Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Ontario, Canada Posts: 873	Re: Transformation Madness 2 I haven't started reading it yet, but the layout on the story pages are awful. If you're releasing another one of these I would recommend something a little more traditional, or at least a better font, because right now they're just solid walls of text. The illustrations look good though! __________________ Check out the comics I've got for sale over on http://blackshirtboy.com! Or check out my art blog at http://blogshirtboy.tumblr.com

12-06-2014	#2
Mmm... Daikon Hokuto Ujou Haagen Dazs Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 149	Re: Transformation Madness 2 Are these just stand-alone images, or are there sequences?

12-06-2014	#3
Matador Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Bum Fuck Egypt Posts: 180	Re: Transformation Madness 2 [QUOTE=Mmm... Daikon;741515]Are these just stand-alone images, or are there sequences?[/QUOTE Each TF has a 3 image sequence.