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Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 430
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Re: SW Story: Stale Meal [Part 2/?]
I like the concept for your story. Some proof reading would really help it. I wouldn't let LK prevent you from writing more in the future. If anything ask some of us to proof it before you post it and I'm sure you will receive a better reception. I hope to see more from you in the future.
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Join Date: Feb 2015
Posts: 322
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Re: SW Story: Stale Meal [Part 2/?]
I was being sarcastic :P
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Banned
Join Date: Feb 2015
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Re: SW Story: Stale Meal [Part 2/?]
Thanks for the feedback guys! I'll try my best to proof read and better my skills. I was hesitant on if this story was too personal fantasy or just plain dumb
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