The Bikini Contest (AR Comic)

[Dreamtales]

Originally Posted by godleydemon

but the story was flawed, weak and overall disappointing.

I find myself hating Lauren more and more with each comic I read and it's turning me off of dream tales comics. I may just keep buying to keep up my collection at this point. I think the only thing at this time, that can help keep my interest in any of the Betsy and Lauren comics, is if Betsy finally get's some damn revenge.

I appreciate the feedback and will take it as a personal challenge to come up with new story lines that will have a broader appeal. That said, these are AR comics, so the basic premise is pretty silly - people do not get younger, so there's a certain amount of suspension of belief involved in the genre. This was a short story intended to show off AR artwork, humiliation and role reversal in a few pages. It's not a longer detailed story with more character development and psychological suspense like Sex in a Bottle or Yard Work.

Anyway, I'm hoping you all will like the next AR comic, which will NOT be a Betsy & Lauren story...