New Story "Take It All In" by Clovis

[clovis]

Originally Posted by robclassact

Just got caught up with this one. Definitely takes me back to your classic stories. Love your eye for details (shaking rooms, physical descriptions, etc.) and your rich characters.

I'm glad you're liking it, and thank you for your continued support.

The previous post was meant as a way of venting my frustration in a (hopefully) creative way. I feel like someone who has spent hours (more like months) slaving away to prepare a meal only to have everyone sit down, eat up, and leave without saying a thing.

The story will continue, but I'm not exactly sure as to how. I wanted it to be free, but it hardly seems worth it. I've toyed with the idea of sending it out only to those who have expressed interest, but that only seems like more work.

If there are aspects you are liking, speak up so I know what's working. If there are parts you don't like, speak up- I can take criticism, and often a negative comment leads me to look at things differently and often come up with a solution that even I like better.

Anyway, to anyone who has read this far, thank you.