Flu Shots Part Five (Ready 12 16)

Janus Steel · 12-16-2016

Not going to lie, this has a lot of the same problems I saw with the other ones. Zoe's boobs look tacked on, still, the faces look way weird when the kids grow younger and the ending between Zoe and Madison is just frustrating since nothing seems to have been done between the two characters except a change of words.

It really feels like this was a cope out DT. I will admit I didn't expect to see the ending happening this way but it seems to ignore everything that Godley and I were talking about for the first 4 parts of this series. I still purchased it to support you as an artist and a storyteller but I can't be the only one who thought Zoe deserves some sort of comeuppance or something. Most of your stories seem to have the two female leads just make amends instead of simmering or acting like real people.

Sorry just my rant but I felt like I had to respond after buying and reading this version of the book.

12-16-2016	#18
Janus Steel The Incorrigible Author Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Richmond, Virginia Posts: 581	Re: Flu Shots Part Five (Ready 12 16) Not going to lie, this has a lot of the same problems I saw with the other ones. Zoe's boobs look tacked on, still, the faces look way weird when the kids grow younger and the ending between Zoe and Madison is just frustrating since nothing seems to have been done between the two characters except a change of words. It really feels like this was a cope out DT. I will admit I didn't expect to see the ending happening this way but it seems to ignore everything that Godley and I were talking about for the first 4 parts of this series. I still purchased it to support you as an artist and a storyteller but I can't be the only one who thought Zoe deserves some sort of comeuppance or something. Most of your stories seem to have the two female leads just make amends instead of simmering or acting like real people. Sorry just my rant but I felt like I had to respond after buying and reading this version of the book. __________________ Find me at... The Incorrigible Author, Smashwords, Amazon, Facebook, Twitter, Google + or Google +, Pintrest, Tumblr, Deviant Art, Steam, Twitch, YouTube, Goodreads "One of the common failings among honorable people is a failure to appreciate how thoroughly dishonorable some other people can be, and how dangerous it is to trust them" - Thomas Sowell "Though I am always in haste, I am never in a hurry." - John Wesley "But it's an easy fix. One line of dialogue. 'Thank God we invented the... you know, whatever device.'" - Rob Lowe, Thank you for Smoking