Watch Your Tongue! - Shrink Fan Comics

[Captain Ash]

I liked the story.
It begins like one of these spooky comics.
Although being mean, Mandy is still invited to parties. On her way she nearly drives over an old gypsy who puts a curse on her.

The details how Mandy’s clothes and shoes are getting more and more baggy are awesome.
I also liked her attempt to hide to the other party guests how small she got.
But one of my most favourite shrinking scenarios are: Shrinking into the car.

What I missed most was the conflict between the friends.
I’d like to see Tammy’s attitude like this: Now matter how mean I’m to you, you had to be nice to me.
Or Tammy trying to tell Mandy that being a submissive maid is the same like being nice.
Well, compared to the spooky beginning, the ending was a bit too nice for me.
But nonetheless it was a good read.

Captain Ash

[J Yubari]

Originally Posted by Captain Ash

I liked the story.
It begins like one of these spooky comics.
Although being mean, Mandy is still invited to parties. On her way she nearly drives over an old gypsy who puts a curse on her.

The details how Mandy’s clothes and shoes are getting more and more baggy are awesome.
I also liked her attempt to hide to the other party guests how small she got.
But one of my most favourite shrinking scenarios are: Shrinking into the car.

What I missed most was the conflict between the friends.
I’d like to see Tammy’s attitude like this: Now matter how mean I’m to you, you had to be nice to me.
Or Tammy trying to tell Mandy that being a submissive maid is the same like being nice.
Well, compared to the spooky beginning, the ending was a bit too nice for me.
But nonetheless it was a good read.

Captain Ash

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