My first SW story... now on the correct forum

Tiedefender · 12-19-2017

I thought it was okay. However, I know nothing about Fate Zero.

The biggest problem I had was with writing.com. Most of the time it gets to overloaded with traffic.

Other than that it has the same problem as my story. That is introducing the characters to people who don't know them.

Anotherfetishguy · 12-20-2017

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Originally Posted by Tiedefender

I thought it was okay. However, I know nothing about Fate Zero.

The biggest problem I had was with writing.com. Most of the time it gets to overloaded with traffic.

Other than that it has the same problem as my story. That is introducing the characters to people who don't know them.

Yeah I kind of took the fanfiction approach of assuming the reader already knows the characters. I forgot that most people are not filthy weebs like I am. In the future if I ever actually write again I'll introduce the characters.

View Poll Results: How terrible was this?
1 - Not bad at all!	3	37.50%
2 - It was okay...	2	25.00%
3 - Not bad for a rough dra- wait this is the final product?	0	0%
4 - Writing may not be your thing...	0	0%
5 - I've read Sonic foot fetish stories on DeviantArt that had better writing than this.	3	37.50%
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12-19-2017	#1
Tiedefender Process Master Join Date: May 2016 Location: USA Posts: 608	Re: My first SW story... now on the correct forum I thought it was okay. However, I know nothing about Fate Zero. The biggest problem I had was with writing.com. Most of the time it gets to overloaded with traffic. Other than that it has the same problem as my story. That is introducing the characters to people who don't know them.