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[Tancred]

Hi! Here is my first good story... If someone can correct -or illustrate- it, it will be verry appreciate! Lol!

Your advices are welcome! ;-)

Thank you for your help, Transfnight!


Oceanne's Diary

April 2nd
Dear Diary

I had an awful day. It was my first day in a new school and I think that I won't be popular this year... I know, again. It is almost a tradition with me. In every school I go, I'm a reject. Why should it be different this time?

It will be all for this night, I must do a Spanish homework for tomorrow.

Chow.


April 3rd
Dear diary,

I know that you can't see me but you can be sure that I'm crying. A girl at school did me a bad joke. I don't know why but she put some strange stuff in my lunch while it was in the micro wave. I found some red liquid, black hairs, etc. The problem is that I ate half of my lunch when I saw it. I feel sick now... I hope that it will be better tomorrow. Also, my school bag disappeared. I'll go to bed earlier tonight, I'm so tired and I feel sick.

C ya!

April 4th
Dear diary,

for some reason, I feel better today. I had a better day at school too! The girl who put all this dirty stuff in my lunch yesterday came to me to be sorry. She told me that this joke wasn't for me but for another girl who gave her problems before. Anyway, she asked to me to eat with her group. It is almost like I was popular. I'm still an outsider to them, I don't get inside but I hope to be accepted this time. I'll let you; I must shave my legs before to go to bed...


Bye,

Oceanne

April 5th
Dear diary,
I had a good day today too. Girls at school are fine and all I also saw an interesting boy, he's named P.J. It seems that he saw me too! ^-^! The only problem I had today was my tongue. It is so dry, even if I drink; it is dry two minutes after. I think that I'll go see the doctor next week. For the moment, I have too much homework.

Good bye!


April 6th
Dear diary,
good day again but I feel strange. First, my tongue's still so dry but, I also have strange desires. I wanted milk... Well it is not that usually I hate milk but today, for some reason, I wanted just to drink milk.

Anyway, I tried sushi too today. I found a little sushi bar near of the college and I tried some. Pretty gook you should be surprised if you are able to eat it too.

I must go now, must shave my legs. I don't want to look like a hairy monster at school tomorrow!

Good bye...


April 7th
Dear diary,
did I shave my legs yesterday? I'm sure that I did but this morning, when I woke up, my legs was hairy again and they look even more than usually. Anyway, I'll shave them tonight. Except that, I had a good day too. My tongue's still dry but I'd get used to it. The problem is that I don't stop to bit my tongue today. Don't know why. I should go see the orthodontist and the doctor next week! Lol! I saw P.J. today. I think that he's in love with me...

Bye


April 8th
Dear diary,
Strange day. Very strange day. FREAKING DAY... I went out with P.J. today. We saw a movie and everything was fine. The problem is when I came back at home that thinks went weird. Remember that strange desires? Well, I drunk full milk cartoon and I know now why I tried sushi. I like believed fish. When I say "I like" it is more than it... I just want to eat it but not only in a sushi. If it was the only problem it shouldn't be so bad but it is not all... My teeth. Well, I think that every girl don't like something about their self but, is it usual to be complexes about canines? Mines looks so longs and so pointy. I never saw it before but I seem to only see that now, when I smile. Anyway, I must be freaking out today. I must be tired. Just forget it...

C ya.
P.s. Thank you to listen to me when I look paranoiac...

April 9th
Dear diary,
It wasn't paranoia, yesterday. Yesterday, when I took off my pants... Well, my legs were kind of hairy, again... Of course, I shave them but when I woke up this morning they was still hairy. More than yesterday. I didn't want to go to school like this... I stayed at home and looked on the web to find some explication about it. I didn't find anything logical. Only black magic was able to explain it. I don't believe this stupid stuff usually but how would you react if, suddenly, you get hairy and that your canines begin to be pointy? I guest that my tongue problem has the same origin. I wrote an e-mail to a friend of mine, from another city who likes the "freaking magic stuff" to try to get an antidote or, at least, an explication. I hope that I won't have any problems...

C ya!


April 10th
Dear diary...
I know what is happening to me... Arnold, my friend, told me that it looks like a transformation spell. He told me that usually, young sorceress use this spell as an initiation, just to get used with the magic language and all. He told me that it is impossible to undo. I only can stop it before it goes too far. But to stop it, I must find who did it to me. I had to go back at school to investigate but it getting harder to hide my changes. You see, my legs aren't my only hairy parts, now. My armpits are getting very hairy too and striped. It makes me think that I'll me some kind of feline or something like that. Anyway, as long that I don't have a tail, I won't have too much problems to hide everything. My arms too are getting hairier but my biggest problem actually is my ears. They look different. I can't tell what but they looks weird. Maybe too thin... That's it. They've got thinner. Anyway, I just had to hide them with my hairs. Actually, I think that Vero, the girl of my first school day, is the one who used this spell on me. I told it to Arnold in my latest e-mail and he answer me back that, he did a ritual to stop the changes. So, if it is her, the changes will stop. I hope that P.J. will still want me, he asked me to go out with him next week end.

Bye!
P.s. I hope that it will work.

April 11th
Dear diary,
IT DIDN'T WORKED. I woke up today with whiskers. It wasn't a big problem to hide it but it means that Vero isn't the one who used this dawn transformation spell. I sent back the names of all the girls of the gang to Arnold to allow him to break the curse. He told me that it would take him two days to do a ritual for all this meople... Yes, I wrote MEOple. Because now, it happen to me to do that kind of mistakes when I speak. It made me look like a freak in a Spanish class today. I must be turning into a cat. I hope that the changes won't give me too much problems in the next two days because, at home, I have some problems to hide it. My younger brother found one of my whiskers in the bathroom and asked me what it should be. I think that my father is now allergic to me too. I must shave my dawn striped legs every morning and when I came back from school. My arms aren't so bad but I'll probably have to shave it every week for all my life.

C ya...
P.s. Don't search me, the cat girl will be crying in her bed! -_-!


April 13th
Dear diary,
the changes didn't change. At the beginning of the day, I was sure that it stopped, I saw nothing different about me but in a math class, I fell something in my pants... I knew what it was but just to see, I asked to go to the bathroom. Do you guest what I've got today? Yes, a tail. It is still short but if Arnold doesn't finish soon, I will get a full cat tail. I've try to get comfortable even if I had a tail but, it is hard. When I came back at home, I also found some other changes. My ears had got kind of pointy too. Again, it is not so bad, because I still can hide them in my hairs but I hope that they won't change anymore because it getting difficult to hide. I... Oh good lord! I... I just saw that while I was writing, my tail was moving behind me. I can move this think. That's so weird. I'll go to bed. I hope that I won't change tonight... I'm scared...

C-ya! I hope!


April 14th
Dear diary,
bad day. I had the e-mail of Arnold this morning, he finished the ritual tonight. But I'm still changing. I put on my socks when they torn on my toes. I've got claws. My feet changed too. My big toe had got smaller and my foot a little bit longer and thinner. I thought that it changed before Arnold finished the ritual but it didn't stop. My tail got longer in the math class. I was scared when I felt it because P.J was just behind me... He didn't saw it... My fur also changed. During the day, I don't know when, my belly, and my breast had got a "cute" little with fur. Well it should be cute on a kitten but not on me... I look on my back and I'm totally stipped up to the shoulders. My legs, body and a part of my arms are hairy. I must find who is changing me into a cat if I want to go back to school next week. Something else, my ears are giving me big problems. Since yesterday in the middle of the day, I must attach my hairs to be able to bend my ears and hide them. They almost look like cat ears now. It gives me an advantage. I went to the wash room to cut my foot -maybe paws- claws -They were cutting my shoes- when I heard someone walking. I've been able to put back my shoes just in time to hide my claws... My hearing is getting more accurate. I also can smell the fish form the sushi bar even when I'm in class and THIS is a problem. It makes me hungry. Anyway, if you were able to see me actually, you probably should be amused. Imagine, a girl with a hole in her pant -I did it on an old pair- with a tail passing through it, barefoot... barepaws with little cat ears passing through her hairs. Actually, I'm in t-shirt because my fur make me so warm... anyway, I hope that I won't change anymore tonight, tomorrow is my date with P.J..


C ya!


April 15th
Dear Diary,
It is tonight, I will go see P.J. at a small restaurant he knows. I passed a part of the day to shave my breast, my arms and my neck -Yes, I know, new change- to be presentable in a cute dress. I hope that he won't touch my skin too much because it is kind of rough. Anyway, I'm happy that I didn't changed too much today. I will be able to go out with a guy. -I was scared to have to go out with cats!-

I'll tell you tonight how it was...

Bye!

April 15th 2
Dear diary!
IT WAS HIM! He cursed me. P.J. did it to me! I've just wrote to Arnold and I hope that he'll be able to help me quick. Let me explain you. I was in the restaurant with P.J. but we weren't alone, he was with his friend. I don't know if it is a cat instinct but I felt kind of uncomfortable. I felt like a freak. I was feeling like if everyone was looking at me. After I finish eating my fish and chips with a glass of milk -I know, I can help it! - He said something like "Now, ladies and gentlemen, the best part... ". He detached my hairs -my ears appeared on each side of my head- and he took off my dress to expose my tail. Then, he said: "I told you that I was able to change a girl into a cat! Now, Oceanne, be sure that in a week, you'll be fully a cat! And you can't help it! Want a proof?" He then took an electric mouse out of his pocket and put on the ground. I jumped on it by instinct, half naked before to take back my self control. I put on my dress, attached my hairs and ran to home. Outside of the restaurant, I eared him say that the change will be quicker now that he showed me to them. When I came back at home, I wrote to Arnold to ask him to do the ritual as quick as possible. I hope that I won't change too much...



April 16th
Dear diary,
good new and bad new. First, yes, the change stopped. Arnold did successfully the ritual but kind of late I can't hide myself anymore. My face is kind of different. I've got a muzzle. I didn't notice it at first but I scared all my family. -Except my brother who laugh! - -_-! I tried to hide myself but it was useless, I can't hide myself for all my life! I then explained to my father what happened and he told me that he'll call the principal tomorrow. The changes continued for some hours but it stopped at noon. My feet grew a bit, my hands had got hairy with claws and pads -like my foot did some days ago- and I've got some hairs on my face. I don't know I'll be accepted at school.


April 17th
Dear diary,
my father called Mr. Downstire, the principal today. Mr. Downstire told that many students disappeared since P.J. and his friends were in the school. I guest that usually their victims was fully transformed and nobody was able to find them. Anyway, I stayed at home, while the principal was definitely returning P.J. and his friend at their home. He also tried to explain to other students what happened to prepare my return to school.

During this time, I wrote again to Arnold to ask him if the changes was curable but he told me that no. All he was able to do was to send me a protection spell. He wasn't able to do it before because another spell was already acting on me. I also used this day to "adapt" my uniforms and all my clothes. Making holes on all the pants back. I also put my shoes in the garbage. No shoes can fit on my feet anymore. -Too thin and long. Same thing for my socks. My claws were too pointy to allow me to wear it. And being in sock all the day was kind of ridiculous without shoes. I guest that my footwear's days are over... Should I say my pawwear?

April 18th
Dear diary,
It is my first school day as the "catgirl of the town". Surprisingly, I'm popular! Almost a star. Everybody knows me and they are so fine with me. It is strange because I came at school barepaws -I'm getting used to this word-, swinging my tail nervously behind me and everybody seems to accept me like that. A guy even asked me to go out with him. Well, he's not as beautiful as P.J. but I guest he is better than this one. And I don't think that someone else would like to have a catgirl as a girlfriend.
Pretty good day, at all! ;-)

C ya!

[Kirokusclone]

I wouldn't mind her as a girlfriend....

[Mattariel]

Spellcheckers are your friend.
Seriously, if you cleared up the spelling, I would overlook the other grammar, spelling and punctuation issues, and anyone simply interested in the subject-matter of a story would likely do the same.

I won't comment further at this time, though.

[Tancred]

In fact, the problem is that english isn't my first language.

[transfnight]

Really nice story

well with spellcheckers, you will be able to correct some bad typos
-The girl whou(WHO) put all this dirty sutff (stuff)
...

[Tancred]

Originally Posted by transfnight

Really nice story

well with spellcheckers, you will be able to correct some bad typos
-The girl whou(WHO) put all this dirty sutff (stuff)
...

Well, I don't have any english spellchecker! Lol!

[transfnight]

Originally Posted by Tancred

Well, I don't have any english spellchecker! Lol!

I did a really quick correction with my spellchecker...I send it to you

[Tancred]

Thank you for your help, Transfnight!

Corrected on the first post! ;-)

[FULGOREY2K]

i wouldn't mind that if my gf would turn into a cute catgirl. nice work

[Tancred]

Thanks!

[Tancred]

Hi! Here is just a pic i did about this story! It should be the 14th...