Magic Rings

[Captain Ash]

Interesting story.

I like the way you've described the fury and the human world.
Also how Rose describes things from her point of view.
It reminds me a bit of the point'n'click game Inherit the Earth.

I've enjoyed reading this story, except for the last part.
It went a little too fast and I'm not into diapers.

I like also the drawings.
The artist did a great job on the face expressions.

Greetings
Captain Ash