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Join Date: Jun 2005
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Re: A Midsummer Night's Dream (SW, fairies, shrink potion)
Hi,
for your first shrunken women story, it was great. And if Disney's Gorgoyles could play with Shakespears works, then so can you. ![]() The beginning was a bit hard to read because it is too descriptive. Later when the fairies were alone with Puck and had their conversation with him, it became interesting and fun to read. I wonder what the fairies are going to do with this potion? ![]() Thank you for sharing this story with us. Greetings Captain Ash
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