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03-03-2022
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Zone of Darkness
Join Date: Jul 2008
Posts: 5,455
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Re: Laundry Day - Shrink Fan Comics
You can't wholly remove the rape-ishness of the scenario without completely remaking the comic but I think a big help would be to tone down the back and forth of begging and pleading vs villainous rapist dialogue.
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