The World's Smallest Woman (Complete)

[Captain Ash]

Hi qzar9999,

first at all you wrote a really awesome story.
In Word the story is about 7 pages long, so don’t worry - it’s normal for a short story.
I liked the funny dialog and word jokes between the two characters.
Megan’s disbelief in small one-foot-woman made her acting na?ve and Rebecca’s little appearance using her body size to playing innocent and giving Megan a reason to prove herself being a real woman were excellent.

While reading the story, I imagined how the story would continue and that Megan wonders how it’s possible being that small, after making sure that Rebecca’s body size is not a fake.
Rebecca would offer her to show her with the prospect of becoming normal again (so Rebecca would Megan do this all by her own will, telling her of course not how long she had to stay this form); bored and curious too, silly Megan would accept this offer.

What I’m missing in this story was when Megan was shrunk she could have acting more panic, like trying to jump in order to reach the lock or squeezing herself through the bars.
After realizing her situation and apologizing how wrong she was, Rebecca could torture her a bit like to poke her breasts and punishing her for humiliating her because of her size before.
In the end when Rebecca is going to leave former prison, I in Megan’s place would start cursing this bitch what she had done and what doing to her when regaining her originally body size back instead being mad of her boyfriend (which should be her last concern in such a situation – even hoping that he wouldn’t looking for her in a place like this).
After being left alone, Megan should be aware of herself that she had to be in this place for a horrible long time, being nothing more than another attraction and be in the mercy of her keeper and nobody knowing what happened to her.
(Maybe she could start wondering if she could do something cruel like that?)

What I also missed a bit in this story was Megan’s appearance. We know that Rebecca is a blonde hot woman with some enormous boobs and Megan only a C-cup.
I would like to know what Megan’s hair colour is and if she wears her hairs long or short (maybe how big she was before she was shrunken).

To dsojourn comments:
It is plausible wondering why these women are not trying to crying for help, but if they do, they would get never the chance to return to their former self.
Even if they are regaining their full body size, they cannot sue these people because they had tricked others to becoming victims like they were before, so they cannot tell it anyone.
Besides, it would be embarrassing for them, showing the whole world what poor little things they had become (and scientists and doctors would do with them).
Its not that they didn’t want to escape, but mentioned before they probably wouldn’t get the chance to get out of their prison and thus the cage is actually a safety measure to keep out the sightseer visitors, before someone thinks he could take her home.
Thinking about it, if Rebecca were really that much of a bitch, she could keep lil’Megan as her pet. …but that would be a different story^^

Okay, that’s enough comments for today.
Thank you qzar9999 for writing this story, I really enjoyed it.



Captain Ash