Billie

[Akurei]

Well aside from the obvious questions you put at the end of the text anyways, this was actually pretty good. I think off hand it might be a good idea to take out the few author's comments within the first two paragraphs. (Such as mentioning you play WOW and the line "Heh, well i did mentioned she 'only' looked like a 10 year old, all 4'2" of her." These seem a bit out of place.). Otherwise, this was pretty good. I especially liked how you did her bust expanding. That would be a good process to work further on. (The idea of them expanding as the blouse was opened.)

[notorius]

great story. hope you keep it up!

[cherrion]

Second part was just as great as the first. Keep up the good work!

[notorius]

Im bumping this up in hopes that another episode comes up

(This story has alot of potential imo)

[Abazaba]

Originally Posted by notorius

Im bumping this up in hopes that another episode comes up (This story has alot of potential imo)

Would have been better just to PM "theperv584" and ask for another episode. Yes I admit this is well done and would be nice to see an ending or continuation. But thats up to the author to decide and bumping won't do much good aside from piss people off.

[PrBlahBlahtson]

PMs seem to be behaving oddly at best. And I do agree with him, it'd be nice if this continued.

[theperv584]

Hi guys. Thanks for the interest in these stories. I have got the rough idea to write it but cant seem to find the time. Very busy these few months, my final year has just started and i am starting out a venture which both is taking a lot of brainpower and time.

Maybe you guys can suggest themes for me to write about. It well help alot. A neko girl? Birthing? Or stuff... I visit the forums often and am very glad that you guys like the stories.

Cheers.

[notorius]

Originally Posted by theperv584

Hi guys. Thanks for the interest in these stories. I have got the rough idea to write it but cant seem to find the time. Very busy these few months, my final year has just started and i am starting out a venture which both is taking a lot of brainpower and time.

Maybe you guys can suggest themes for me to write about. It well help alot. A neko girl? Birthing? Or stuff... I visit the forums often and am very glad that you guys like the stories.

Cheers.

As long as theres AP, i think anything would do. Birthing, and AP (of the child) would be cool

Originally Posted by theperv584

Hi guys. Thanks for the interest in these stories. I have got the rough idea to write it but cant seem to find the time. Very busy these few months, my final year has just started and i am starting out a venture which both is taking a lot of brainpower and time.

Maybe you guys can suggest themes for me to write about. It well help alot. A neko girl? Birthing? Or stuff... I visit the forums often and am very glad that you guys like the stories.

Cheers.

I suggest a 6-year-old with the brain of a college student morphing into a college student with the brain of a 6-year-old. Never hurts to mix in some funny.