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Angela's first day (My new series.)
I recently began working on a new series which involves some shrinking. So far it is about 4 pages in, with quite a bit more to go. I don't really get much opportunity to work with SW so I hope you all don't mind my inexperience.
Page 1: http://fav.me/d7d8lb5 Page 2: http://fav.me/d7e3d9t Page 3: http://fav.me/d7f7613 Page 4: http://fav.me/d7f76j2 6/21/14 Update: Page 5: http://fav.me/d7e3das 6/22/14 Update: Page 6: http://fav.me/d7lf7ij 6/30/14 Update: Page 7: http://fav.me/d7eiit5 Page 8: http://fav.me/d7f75k9 7/14/14 Update: Page 9: http://fav.me/d7f7ig2 Page 10: http://fav.me/d7fczun Page 11: http://fav.me/d7fmc2p Page 12: http://fav.me/d7qdn30
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)
mmmm Not bad!
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)
Your skill with 3D shrinking encourages commissioning!
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)
Great!
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)
nice!
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)
Thanks!
Well here is hoping I get lots more excuses to make more SW content. I try. xP Thank you.
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)
Is this made exclusively in MMD, or do you use photoshop or other image manipulation tools at all? I mean, barring the text of course.
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)
There is a bit of photoshop used to smooth out certain jaggedy parts like elbows when the arm is bent a certain way or things like that. No major editing.
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)
Ah, alright then. And I noticed from the tags that this is apparently actually 3DCG and not MMD. Apparently the program has changed a lot since I tinkered with it last a couple years back. I don't recall there being model scaling.
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)
That is a really nice comic.
Maybe you could work a little bit more on the face expression but I like it how she loosens into her uniform. Captain Ash
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)
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Thanks, glad you like the clothing effects. And can you be a little but more specific on what it is about the expressions you think need more work?
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)
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Page 2 where the shrinking starts she has the face expression between "noticed that she is shrinking" and worrying. So far so good! Page 3 ,however, has just the "okay, I'm shrinking" face expression. Someone who is shrinking and who never experienced something like that before, should be worried, confused, puzzled, or a a mix of all these feelings. She knows its happening but know that she can't do anything about it. Or she is not capable to understand the situation. At page 3 bottom pic, her eyes are shut. For me it looks like that she is pissed off rather than being embarrassed. These are my suggestions what could be improved. Hope it was helpful. Greetings Captain Ash
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