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Join Date: May 2005
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If you don't want the explination and just the story and pic, just skip to the part that says this: BLAH BLAH BLAH WORDS WORDS WORDS
You might be wondering, where did THIS specific bit come from. Well, befoe I get too into it, here's the starting point(s): http://test-0.deviantart.com/art/Req...k-P-4-28374380 http://test-0.deviantart.com/art/Req...k-P-7-28374673 Yep, that's right, this is an idea that was brewing for such a long time that it is almost my first major process idea I had ever had. Not JUST this specific part of it though. See, nows the part where I explain in further detail. ![]() Back in the day, specifically the days I made those two sequences, I had a hankering for an interactive story thread, where I would write a story and have a bit of artwork sketched up based off that part of the story. The way it would have worked was that I would post the story part, then poll people on who they would like to concentrate on most. This would, in turn change the direction of the story, into various story arcs and very different endings and so on. When an ending was reached, we would go back the story tree to set points and go on watching other specific characters, until that section of the tree was finished and we would move back to a previous arc until all the possible endings were reached. As you might expect, while a good idea on paper, the most difficult part was getting the whole thing working. ^^; ANYWAYS, here's what happened next. Sutibaru found the dating sim/graphical story maker and I thought it would be a fun idea to try and write a story for it instead. But the branching tree system was too difficult to even begin to start with what I had and I never got it done. So what WAS the story's? The first involved, as you might guess, the character from Inuyasha and the Demon Bubbles. As explained in the story, Kagome gets... popped by one of the bubbles and split into three parts (her essence specifically, or the cumulative of her body mind and soul). From there concentrating on the characters would change the story, based mostly on their emotions. Each emotion would change them in some way, as well as later the status of the part of essence stuck within them (Kagome). Blah blah blah, stuff happens. Main problem with the idea: I had to wait for every possible vote before posting a new section. Slow moving just doesn't work with me. ^^; The second story has nothing to do with this, so I'll keep it to myself. ![]() So anyways, round about way of saying it, but one of the particular branches followed Sango a bit much, whom is 'oddly' affected by the event. That is to say, in this story at leas, she has a bit of a preg fetish as well as anything along those lines. So when the idea of having Kagome inside her clicked into her mind, it hit a few things loose as well. ![]() ![]() Now before you go any further, know that when the essences bubbles break, that's basically the end of that part of the story. No deaths happen, though in a lot of cases part of Kagome's essence is mixed in with one of the other main characters, usually in a transformational way but in some cases a more 'specific' use for said essence can occur. In the case where one part of Kagome's essence is used up it's still possible to return her back to almost normal, but she'll be missing a third of herself, mostly her physical body. ![]() So what sudden spur hit me so hard that I went and sketched this up as well as write the story all in the same night? A friend of mind reminded me of it a few too many times inadvertently while trying to get a different result. Hah. ![]() BLAH BLAH BLAH WORDS WORDS WORDS So anyways, here's the story part for the pic, which I'll be very likely color in some time as it's a very clean sketch. :3 Enjoy, contains a bit of AR, just a few years to accent the preg nothing like a major AR. I'm not a good story writer for the most part, I tend to repeat stuff a lot and proof reading my own stuff barely finds all the problems, spelling grammer and other. Also I tend to say stuff I said before. Whelp, enjoy! ![]() ***STORY*** Sango hid from the others, her embarrassment rising with ever second... along with her arousal. She shook her head, trying to clear it out, now alone to get her bearings. With no one around to see her maybe she could... "Sango try to calm down. Something's happening in here!", Kagome's voice echoed in her head. She sighed, realizing there was nowhere to hide from the one person that mattered most to this problem, Kagome. Such an odd situation they were all in, much more so then usual at the very least. Kagome inhaling that bubble, which then inflated her till she 'burst'. But instead of a gruesome end she was met with a different problem, the bubble was now around Kagome... all three of her! Somehow the bubble had not just popped her, but split her very life essence into three more bubbles which quickly seeked refuge within the nearest people they could. Mainly her friends. Sango knew she had to calm her emotions, especially the odd attraction she felt to this situation. The bubbles reacted to powerful emotions and if she had any it would react in odd ways, not only altering the part of Kagome within her but her own body as well! Just the thought of it, however... "Ah... ahh...", she breathed out, putting her hands to her face. She knew now, with Kagome inside her, that Kagome felt everything that she did, which should have calmed her or made her fearful, but all the idea of this did was make it harder to think straight. Even in this way, the very idea of having someone within her, slowly growing within her belly... "Sango stop! The Bubbles getting smaller!", she snapped back to reality and let out a breath, embarrassment falling over her once again. Her hand moved to her chest... and slowly down to her belly, which now extended inches from her original flat form. She blushed and once again bounced back to attraction, then back again to her embarrassment again, her emotions bouncing back and forth, causing them to intensify even more. She knew, with the part of Kagome's essence stuck in a bubble... inside her... that her growing emotions would cause the bubble to react... much stronger then ever before. Another shift drew Sango's attention. It felt like... her body was retreating back within it's self, her feelings of shame pulling her inward. She tried to doubt this was the case, but sure enough she could see her already inflated belly growing below her. But along with that, she noticed her clothing getting a bit looser, her breasts seemed much smaller then normal... her face... "Please, stop! I think I'm getting younger now too!", Kagome cried out, not only from her own distress but the feeling of shame and arousal that were being mirrored on top of her. Sango lurched forward, her belly now so much larger, so much... rounder... so full... SLAP! Sango smacked her face as hard as she could and in a quick snap the fog of reflecting emotions faded from her sight showing just how far she had gotten because of them. Her one hand went to her face, not to nurse the sore cheek so much as to feel her face it self. To her, it felt like it used to be, years ago. Smoother, nicer, before she had taken a few too many scratches from the demons she had fought. Her other hand felt her belly, her eyes staying away from the sight for fear of a recursion of her last emotional burst. It extended from her body, far out now. She didn't feel like anything was actually inside, just like she had held her breath and extended outward, much like the nights should would do so when no one was around, trying to fake the feeling of having a life within her own... Oh no! "SANGO! Ah, that's enough! Ahhh ahh...", Kagome labored out, her pants echoing within Sangos mind, the feeling of arousal and embarrassment peaking so much more then before, "I'm shrinking fast but the bubble is still catching up! If this keeps going, it'll pop!". Sango tried her best to try and hold back the emotions she had tried so hard to hide in the past, but it was too much for her, the situation was not just a fantasy that she would have randomly in the night but reality, a third of Kagome's life essence now stuck within her, magically altering her based off her emotions, not only in such a way that kept her from keeping hold of them but a way that keeps her from ever gaining control again. She let out a pant and tried to get back to the rest of the group but with her belly so big and full and her body smaller and more youthful, now lacking the muscle she had built over time, she could barely make it a few steps before she fell to her knees, her arms wrapped around her belly saying, "I... I'm sorry Kagome... I just can't... stop... ah... Ahhh... AH!" With that final crescendo of feeling, the bubble within Sango reached it's limits and burst, leaving the very youthened essence of Kagome to mix with Sango's, or more specifically, her new child. |
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Process Fan
Join Date: Jan 2007
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Re: Sango Preg + minor AR: Includes story
Amazingly well done, Test-O! You have inspired me to stop lurking and comment on this.
First of all, the pictures are amazing and display the mixed emotions very well for what Sango is going through. Secondly, the story itself is very interesting and creative. Thirdly, the creativeness of this astounds me, most people just resort to a 'Kagome has jewel shard= big boobs, big belly, pregant, etc...' All in all, this is one to the best things that I have seen on the process in a while. |
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Join Date: May 2005
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Re: Sango Preg + minor AR: Includes story
Thank you. Thanks a LOT.
![]() I really liked the idea, it's been swimming in my head for like ever. The bubbles, the emotions, everything. Usually by the time I ever act on an idea it's almost completely different, but in this case it never really changed. ![]() I think it might be a good idea for me to patch up the story more when I post the color version of the sketch. While my sleepless fevered typing might have pounded out a nice story, it might not be entirely... there. Much like I was. ^^; More descriptions, better character identification, generally better and less jumbled structure might be a good idea. ![]() Who knows if this gets popular enough I might end up doing another 'bad' ending to the story. The only real ending is where everything returns back to normal, much like it should, but that doesn't mean that I can't have fun making up other endings to it as well. ![]() |
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Cubone Alone
Join Date: Jul 2007
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Re: Sango Preg + minor AR: Includes story
Wow. You don't often put so much story meat on your sketches. This was an enjoyable read.
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Pink Princess
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Someplace with stuff in it
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Re: Sango Preg + minor AR: Includes story
Finally got a chance to read this. I was going to say something but didn't get a chance to read it before. The picture is nicely done as always Test-0. Great artwork. And the story was well thought out and well done. You put a lot of work into it and one can tell. Awesome work.
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Join Date: May 2005
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Re: Sango Preg + minor AR: Includes story
Thank you.
![]() When I eventually get the pic colored, I'll be using it as my new av, which this current one just being a good sub for the moment. Also when I post the color version and new version of the story, I'll be thinking of one of the other endings to the story I could do up. After all there are three people that end up with a bubbled Kagome in them, might as well see one of their endings as well. ![]() |
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Join Date: Jun 2006
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Re: Sango Preg + minor AR: Includes story
Wow, that was a different kind of pregnancy story. Did Sango basically implode with Kagome inside of her?
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Join Date: May 2005
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Re: Sango Preg + minor AR: Includes story
Not quite, though the final burst of the demon bubble would likely have left one final regression on Sango before it's effects went away, so she would end up VERY pregnant with a third of Kagome's essence (basically, she's now expecting a baby Kagome :3) and rather regressed. So massive belly on cute and small young Sango at the most, maybe even some of Kagome's physical traits added or mixed with her own for good measure.
![]() Something of note, the entire story for this isn't just preg based. In fact this is the only preg related ending right now. The other possible endings have different effects occur as well. After all, this is only two emotions: Attraction (preg expansion) and Embarrassment (Age regression). ![]() |
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