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The Fountain of Growth
The first four chapters of a story I've recently been starting on writing.com. Tell me what you think (and yes, I know the premise is pretty stupid). Process doesn't begin until chapter 4.
Prologue Thousands of years ago there existed a mystical fountain. Several, actually. It was said to give whoever should touch so much as a foot in it increased power. Though in this case, "increased power" means growth. The process seemed to be different for everyone or everything that touched the water, but it led to a feud the likes of which few have heard of. At one point dozens of these fountains existed, and each one led to a war between tribes, wanting to make their armor, weapons, and people bigger, tougher, and stronger. Eventually the race became so big and so fierce that it angered the gods themselves! Two assistant demigods, a boy named Resta and a girl named Pura, were sent to eliminate the fountains, draining them of their water and sending it back to the heavens forever. It also cursed whoever grew from it in the first place, shrinking them down to 1/100th of their original size! And for thousands of years that was the last anyone ever heard of the legendary fountains. However, there is still one source left that contained the source of the growing liquid. It was in a little corner, in the suburbia of one Japanese city. It was from an old, decayed fountain, one that was said to be dried out for years. That is, until a 16 year-old girl named Kiseki Sunohara found it...and with it the "biggest" experience that was about to happen to her in her teenage life! Chapter 1: Stranger than fiction It was a typical morning for young Kiseki Sunohara. As her bedroom clock rang, reading 7:00 a.m. on it as it continued to hum a loud, annoying hum, she quickly found herself shutting it off, only to be further put back to sleep after doing so.Unfortunately, this was a bad move on her part, as Kiseki wound up looking at the clock almost a hour later, and school started at 8! "Oh crap!" the girl gasped as she quickly got out of her be and proceeded to brush her teeth and hair, quickly get dressed, and dashed out of the house, forgetting her lunch and books (which she quickly ran back in to get). She then found herself running at the fastest she could mutter in an attempt to at least not miss the entire first period, but found herself at odds with her empty stomach...and collapsed right there on the sidewalk. But first, let's talk about Kiseki herself. She is a somewhat reclusive, but intelligent 16 year-old girl who lives with her father, who recently got divorced from his wife. However, he's often very busy overseas and such, so Kiseki is typically watched over with care by her grandmother and grandfather from her father's side. They aren't very reliable for waking up their granddaughter, though, and they often sleep in until noon on most days as a whole. Kiseki's physical attributes include her long, flowing hair (which she often keeps in a blue ribbon to make one long ponytail), green eyes, and a skinny, flat build. She is about 5 foot 2 in height, and her best subjects include art and history. She does not have currently have a boyfriend, but is very interested in finding one. As for her school, Kiseki goes to a typical high school, one filled with abut 300 or so students overall among grades 10 through 12 (in Japan, high school is three years long). Her school uniform is fairly plain: it's a ldark blue shirt with long sleeves (and a short, red ribbon on the front), a flap on the back of the shirt, a 2 foot long, dark blue skirt, and small, white ankle socks tucked away in plain, brown shoes. With that said, let us now return to the story in hand. Tired from the walk up the vertically slanted road that lead up to her high school, Kiseki noticed a little corner between two houses that contained a little fountain in the area. It looked dry and a little dirty, but she was very thirsty and wanted to relieve her quench. As she walked down the corner and pressed on fountain's handle, nothing seemed to come out. Thinking that she didn't press the handle far away to the left or right (she tried both directions), Kiseki decided to keep pressing more and more until finally a little drop of water came out of the fountain...and landed right on the ribbon on the front of her school uniform. "That's it?" Kiseki sighed, finally giving up. "Oh well. Better hurry to school then." As she stepped away from the fountain, though, Kiseki felt something odd...like there was something crawling up her shirt. She decided to look down and see that her ribbon had grown to several times its regular size, enough to wrap the girl's entire body once around with! Gasping in shock by what she saw, Kiseki quickly removed the gigantic ribbon from her uniform and measured it up; the bows themselves were bigger than her own head! Kiseki quickly realized that that fountain was no ordinary fountain. Rooting for the trash can about 15 feet by, Kiseki got out an empty, 20 ounce bottle of water and started pumping directly underneath the fountain once again. The water came out much easier this time, though, and soon filled up the entire bottle. She then quickly closed the bottle shut and put the bottle into her red, fairly big backpack. But what to do with the giant ribbon? Kiseki decided to throw it in the trash, it being far too big to be of any use to her now. "I'm sooo going to get detention for improper dress code", she sighed to herself as she quickly ran to her school, now over 15 minutes late. The secret of the fountain would have to wait until after school. Chapter 2: Test subject Soon came and went fairly quickly for young Kiseki, which was good for her. This meant that she could go and see what was up with the weird growth of her ribbon recently, and as she passed the school's front gates she pulled out the bottle filled up with water she saw earlier. She stared at it for quite a while, wondering what to try out the bottle's contents on first to prove to herself that what she saw earlier that day wasn't a lie....or her imagination. "I know!" she said to herself with a smile as she pulled out a pencil from her left skirt pocket. She then slowly opened up the bottle of water and poured a tiny drop on the pencil, careful as to not get it on herself or her clothes. Kiseki watched as the pencil grew to over 10 times its size, now big enough to use as a decent-sized object to blunt people with. It was so big and so heavy that she had to hold it with her whole left hand. She thought she had gone daffy. Closing the water bottle up once again (and putting the giant pencil in her school bag), Kiseki then sprinted home to try out some more things with the bottled water's mysterious growth content. It wasn't long before she found herself colliding with a nearby pole, though, and she dropped her school bag in the process, and with it the water bottle. It slowly rolled out of the school bag somehow and opened up, pouring its content on a nearby piece of grass found in-between the cracks of the sidewalk. Like with the pencil before, it slowly but surely grew so high that it looked like a little patch of a brush. The grass blades had to at least be 2 feet tall now! Now that the bottle's contents were gone, though, Kiseki found herself having to refill up her bottle, so she slowly walked down to the corner with the fountain she saw earlier that day. It seemed unused since earlier, and as she looked in a nearby trash can to see if her ribbon was still there, she was surprised to find out that it was. Kiseki reexamined the giant ribbon from earlier and wrapped it around her body like a scarf. "This is kind of neat", she smiled to herself as she kept the ribbon tied around her neck as she filled up the water bottle's contents once more from the fountain. Like before, though, a little droplet of water fell on another part of Kiseki's body. This time it was her right shoe, which slowly grew in size as Kiseki filled up the bottle. Upon refilling the bottle's contents, the cheerful girl then tripped over her right foot, falling flat on the ground once again, muttering how gravity seemed to have something against her today. It was then that she recollected herself and saw a gigantic shoe that was at least as long as her legs! Kiseki even picked up her shoe to measure it up against her legs, only to find out that the shoe was at least 3 feet tall, if not bigger! Kiseki then decided to pour a little water on her left shoe as well, saying to herself, "Well, they may as well be the same size." Now barefoot and carrying two fairly heavy school shoes home, Kiseki wondered how much weirder her day was going to get. She was thankful at the very least that she had another pair of school shoes, as well as an extra ribbon, but she still had many questions about the water from the fountain. She was especially concerned if it worked on people and not just inanimate objects...she saw the grass blades' growth from earlier as proof that both animate AND inanimate objects could grow. Kiseki just hoped that she wouldn't get any on herself, as she really didn't want to end up as some giant girl that everybody feared. Or worse, liked...and in a much less innocent way. Kiseki finally found herself at home after 20 minutes of walking. She slowly walked into the front door of her house and sprang up to her room to continue further examination of the water from, as she dubbed it, "The Fountain of Growth". Above all, she had to make one thing clear to herself: she couldn't tell anyone about this. Who knows what would happen if someone were to find out about this secret! The rest of Kiseki's day was rather uneventful; she ate, did her homework, took a bath, and then went to bed. She decided to test out the water once again on one of her smaller pillows, watching it as it grew to a length almost as tall and wide as the bed itself! Not only that, but it was extremely comfortable. So much, in fact, that Kiseki decided to put the giant pillow on the ground and simply sleep on it that night. "I could get used to this", Kiseki told herself as she yawned and fell into a deep sleep, fairly excited about what tomorrow might bring...even though she was unaware yet of the events that were about to await her the next day. It was going to be a "big" day tomorrow, all right! Chapter 3: Free Demonstration With new found knowledge of how the mysterious water worked, Kiseki was excited to try it out on as many things as she could. With the touch of a water droplet, a cupcake could grow to the size to a regular cake! Her tiny teddy bear she kept on her bed next to her at night could grow to the size of a real bear. The possibilities for her were endless, but one thing was for sure for her regardless of what she decided to do; she had to keep it a secret. Even to her family and friends. Fortunately for her, today was Saturday, so the day wouldn't be as long as a normal day for her. Quickly getting her stuff for school ready, as well as getting dressed, Kiseki decided to take the water bottle to school today. Once again she tied the lid on very tight, so as to not repeat what happened yesterday again. She couldn't afford to have another one of her articles of clothing growing (she had already used up her spare shoes and bow). Unfortunately for Kiseki, she had already made a mistake with preventing getting water on herself before even leaving her house. As she put her books in her school bag on the top of her desk, somehow a drop of water fell right on the top of her head. The result was a brand new, longer hair-do...one that made her hair 4 feet long in length! Kiseki realized this event quickly, as her desk also had a mirror right in front of her. "Can't do anything about this now", the annoyed girl told herself as she rushed out her bedroom and out the door, hoping she wouldn't have anything weird happen to her that day. A few minutes later she met up with one of her very few friends in school. A cheerful, active girl, her friend Maki couldn't be any different from Kiseki if she tried. With her long, red-brown hair, green eyes, and modest sized chest, she was quite popular with the male students in the school. She was also part of the swim team, surprising everyone with her swimming prowess. Her only possible fault was her size, which was a measly 4 feet and 10 inches, and she was a little self-conscious about it. "Ah! Hello, Kiseki", the girl waved to her friend, stopping as Kiseki came over to her and fell down on her stomach on the ground. In the process her books fell out, including the bottle of water from the growth fountain, which quickly grabbed Maki's attention. "Hmm? This bottle is missing a label. You fill your own water up at home, Kiseki?" she asked her friend before having it swiped right away fron her hands. "I'm sorry, Maki, but that's not exactly water, per se...", Kiseki explained to Maki, quickly placing the bottle behind her back. "Oh? Then what is it? A vitamin energy drink?" "N-no. Not that, either.." "Well, then what is it!? Tell me!" "Well, okay. Hand me something small from your school bag, then", Kiseki told her friend as she grabbed a 1 yen coin from her wallet. She then opened up the bottle of water and put a little bit of on the coin. In a manner of seconds the coin grew in size, growing until it became as big as Maki's hand. Her reaction to the growth was priceless. "W-w-w-w-what the hell was that!?" Maki finally mustered up, taking several steps back from the sight, then moving forward again and picking up the now heavy coin. "This is a joke, right?! A trick!? Magic!? An illusion, maybe?" "Nope, it's real", Kiseki shyly admitted. "What do you think?" "It's...it's...awesome!" Maki replied, giving her friend two thumbs up. "Where did you find this water!?" "I'll tell you after school. Come on, we gotta hurry!" said Kiseki as she gathered up her school books, put the water away, and started running to the school. "We only have 10 minutes before the gates close!" "Right", Maki nodded as she started to run, Kiseki not too far behind her. {i}Besides...there's plenty of fun things to do at school with this magic water as well!{/i} Maki snickered to herself as they headed ever closer to the school gates. Chapter 4: The Fun Begins To say that Maki was anxious about the water that made things grow would be an understatement. As homeroom passed and first period began, she was so excited she could barely think straight. She barely even ate anything that day in anticipation when lunch came about. As usual, Kiseki ate on the top floor of her school, mainly for two reasons. One, she liked the view from the top of the building, which showcased a variety fo trees and even the occasional bird here and there passing by. And two, it was quiet. Kiseki was not the most social of girls, and in that respect she often either ate alone or with Maki. She seldom ate anywhere (or with anyone) else. Before Kiseki could start eating her rice, though, Maki busted through the door leading to the building's top floor. "Hey, Kiseki!" she gleamed as she sat next to her and opened up her own lunch box, which was very American in nature; a ham and cheese sandwich and some assorted chocolate treats here and there. People often wondered how Maki kept up such a great looking body when she often ate junk and drank soda (which she also had in her possession). "Hi, Maki", Kiseki replied. "What's up?" "You know 'what's up'", Maki quickly told her friend as she rooted for her school bag for the bottle of water, quickly pulling it out. "M-Maki!! what are you doing!?" her friend yelled, unnerved that her friend had the gall to bust through her bag and take out her stuff. "I wanna see if this can make my lunch bigger!" Maki replied as she pulled a little bit of water on her sandwich and snacks, watching as they grew to 10 times their normal size. "Maki, you're going to get sick from eating all of that", Kiseki dryly warned her friend, channeling very little emotion into her voice. "Now I see why you were so excited." "Suwah. Cann heer yafuh", Maki said, her mouth full of ham and bread at the time. As she gulped down her food, she looked in awe at how much there was in front of her. "Sooooo cooool!" Unimpressed by her friend's behavior, Kiseki took back the water bottle and decided to pour a few drops of water on her friend's shirt, watching as it grew to 10 times its size! "Hey! What was that for!?" "If you're going to eat that much food, you may as well have a {i}stomach{/i} to match it", Kiseki retorted, pouring further amounts of water on her friend's stomach, which grew to ten times its size as well. "Hey! How am I supposed to fit into the door now!? Or even reach my food!?" an unpleasant Maki asked of her friend as she attempted to reach her food, failing to do so. "I don't know. I thought you'd be glad that you're no longer small. Now you're big like you've always wanted to be, right?" "Not like this!" Maki yelled as she sat down on her stomach and took the water bottle from Kiseki. She then poured some of the water directly on her lips, which pulsed in growth to ten times their size in gradual spurts. "There! Now your mouth matches the size of your attitude!" Maki dryly laughed as Kiseki looked like she was about ready to strangle her friend until she turned black and blue. "Fwwyy fouu...", she attempted to say, only to be distressed by her lisp, watching as Maki laughed in her face about it. "Hee hee! You sound like Donald Duck!" she continued to cry, tears rolling her face from laughing so hard. "I may be a fat blob now, but at least I can understand what I'm saying!" As Maki continued to laugh at the expense of her friend, Kiseki then poured some water onto her face, which grew to match in size with her once in-proportional lips. This, however, caused Maki to only laugh some more. "Oh man! This is wayyyy too funny!" she continued. "First big lips, now a big head! Must be all that hot air you've been saving up!" As Maki continued to laugh, she was unaware that her friend was growing gradual parts of her body with the water bottle. Her uniform, her face, her arms, hands, legs, butt, chest...everything. She then poked at her friend at her backside to tell her something. "What now!? What kind of weird growth did you do this ti-i-i.......?!?!" "Hello!" a now 52 foot tall Kiseki waved to her friend, barely able to keep her butt on the top of the school without moving back and forth like she was on ice. "So! Who's laughing now!?" "Not me...", Maki meekly replied, looking frightened by her giantess friend. "Please don't hurt me!" "Of course not! You're my best friend!" Kiseki smiled as she handed her friend the half-empty bottle of water. "Go on! Grow, too! You've always to be tall, right?" "You bet!" Maki grinned as she sprinkled the water directly over her head, watching as it trickled down her body and slowly made everything grow all at once. Within seconds she was 49 feet and 2 inches tall. At this point the two giantesses were too big to say on the same rooftop together, so they both got off and placed themselves on the ground. "Wow! The view here is amazing!" Maki gasped in awe. "I can see nearly the whol town from this viewpoint." "I know. Isn't it great?" Kiseki agreed. "But at the same time...it's scary. I'm not used to so much attention.." "Calm down, Kiseki", Maki comforted her friend, hugging her in her arms. "We're two tall, beautiful giantesses now. A rare opportunity and a rare sight to behold." "But now we're going to be treated like freaks...or worse. Like monsters." "Look, I'm sure if we act calm and not do anything destructive, the town will welcome us like they would any other person." "You're righ..", Kiseki began to say in a calm, collected tone before she heard a car alarm go off. It seemed as if she hit the teachers' cars in the nearby parking lot. As it went off, one class on the top floor looked out the window to see the tall 50 or so feet tall giantesses in front of them. "Hey! Isn't that Maki Kurosaki and that quiet girl who sits in the back of her classes?" one student asked. "My name is Kiseki!" the girl angrily replied. "Kiseki Sunohara!" "Wow! Maki-san's even prettier when she's big!" one boy replied, making her slightly happy but embarrassed. Several other male students quickly took out their cell phones as Maki actually starting {i}posing{/i} for the boys watching her through the windows, including placing her already modest sized breasts near the windows, blocking the sun almost entirely from the room. "Kurosaki! Stop this at once!" one teacher screamed out loud to the girl. "50 feet tall or not, you cannot interrupt our students as they're working!" "Huh? They're not upset?" Kiseki asked herself in confusion. She then proceeded over to the window that the teacher who just yelled at Maki was at and placed her face all the way up to the front of the window. "Um...sir, how come you're not upset by our recent growth?" "You think you're the first students to discover the town's legendary growing water?" he gruffly replied. "Of course not." "You mean those giant decorations last year were really giant students?" the dense girl asked, her question answered by the teacher (and her friend) slapping his face in annoyance. "It's not a big deal, Kiseki. You know this stuff is temporary, right?" Maki said to her friend. "W-w-wait! You knew about this water all along?!" "Of course I did! I just didn't imagine {i}you{/i} would find it." "Then how come I didn't see any warnings or anything from the fountain I found it at..?" "The location changes every year in Japan, as well as the world. The water seems to come and go, and it's really rare that it came two years in a row. Apparently the last time the water came by here outside of this two-year cycle was in 1948." "Wow! That's older than my parents", Kiseki gasped. "No wonder you were only mildly annoyed by my growing your stomach." "Sunohara! Kurosaki! Stop talking and get back to class! Lunch room is over!!" the teacher snapped once again as the two giantess students moved a few footsteps to the left to their class. "Um...could someone hand us our books and writing tools so we can make them bigger? Thank you", Maki asked of her classmates, watching as two blushing boys delivered them to her. The two giantesses used the very last of the water in the bottle to write down their notes. "This is the weirdest class I've ever taken", Kiseki whispered to herself. "I can hear you, Sunohara", her annoyed teacher sighed under his breath. "And you boys by the windows! Stop drooling at those girls and pay attention to my lecture!!" Chapter 5: Talk of the Town As the school day came to an end, news of Kiseki and Maki's growth didn't take too long to get around the town, considering they were 50 foot tall giantesses. As Maki earlier demonstrated, her new size made her quite a target to the boys not only at her and her friend's school, but other schools as well. She even gave out a giggle as she watched some of the girlfriends of these boys get annoyed or even slap their boyfriends for making long stares at the tall swimmer. Kiseki herself also gathered quite a bit of attention. Originally ignored at school for being quiet, almost invisible at times with the rest of her classmates, her 50+ foot stature certainly helped gather up attention she normally didn't recieve. Unlike Maki, however, Kiseki did not think the stares and "Ooh"'s of the boys around her were warranted, and she was even a little ashamed of it. "Maki, I don't like this. People are staring at me", the girl whined to her friend, who was at the moment posing with a V sign with her fingers to fellow photographers from various newspapers, both local and high school. "Relax, Kiseki. Have fun with it", Maki smiled in reply as she grabbed hold of Kiseki's shirt and lifted it up, revealing her red sports bra. The reaction was a barrage of cell phone gathering and flashes from cameras that were usually reserved for famous people such as a president of a country, a CEO, or a famous rock star. "MAKI!!!!" Kiseki whined as she cried tears of embarrassment. She then grabbed hold of her friend's skirt and pulled it down, revealing her Doreamon-ladened panties. "There! Let's see how you like it!" As Maki's gigantic skirt fell down to the crowd of people below, several of the guys below her started vying for it, taking sides of it like it was tug of war. Maki quickly grabbed hold of her skirt again and adjusted it back on her body, literally flicking off the guys still attached to it like mosquitoes on a person's leg as they landed a few feet back on the ground (none of them were hurt, but a few were saddened). "Okay, I won't do that anymore!" Maki sighed as she continued to adjust her skirt, while at the same time Kiseki put back on her shirt. "But you do have to admit that you've never stood out quite this much before." "I guess so", Kiseki agreed with reluctance. "But now what? We can't go home now at this size." "What are you talking about, siully? You know where the fountain is, right? Let's use it to create a jumbo sized abode for the two of us!" "Well, okay..", Kiseki nodded, guiding her friend to the place in question. Due to her much longer legs, it took the duo only a fraction of the time as it would otherwise to get to the corner that the fountain was located in. However, due to her new stature, Kiseki could barely fit herself in the alleyway, standing up between the two houses like a sore thumb. Still, slowly but assuringly she got her regular sized 20 ounce water bottle, which now looked like a little tea cup for a little doll. She very gently pumped on the handle of the fountain and watched as the water continue to rise into the bottle. When that was done she gently closed the lid and placed the bottle in her left skirt pocket. "Got it", Kiseki said as she showed the bottle filled with the magic water in her left hand. "Okay, Maki, now what? Where are we staying when the sun comes down and night comes?" "Well, we need to find a place that doesn't have a lot of buildings or trees nearby. Since we're 50 feet tall now, the area around us must also grow to at least 10 times our size to accompany our new stature." "That leaves out hotels and houses, then", Kiseki sighed. "And if we go into any fields we may destroy the crops with our giant bodies." "There's GOT to be someplace to go, though!", an irritated Maki thought out loud. "But where?" As the two spent several minutes in deep though, a local boy tugged on Maki's giant left sock. The boy looked quite young, barely 8 or so years, and he had short, black hair, auburn-colored eyes, and was wearing a plain white shirt and jeans. "Why don't you two sleep in the town's sports stadium?" he suggested to the two giantesses. "The stadium is really, really big!" "Yeah, that sounds great", Maki agreed, lowering her head down to the boy's eye level. "Thank you, little boy. What's your name, by the way?" "Ryo. Ryo Hoshirashi." "Why, thank you very much then, Ryo-kun", Maki smiled as she placed her fairly large lips on the boy's left cheek. "Bleh!" he remarked, wiping off the lipstick from his face as Kiseki and Maki headed their way north to the sports stadium located a couple of miles from town. "Eww! Girls are icky", Ryo said to himself as he placed his left hand on his lipstick laden-face, blushing a little as he continued to wipe the lipstick off his face still. "And yet.." He turned around to see the two giantesses walking further away from him, hearing them talk to each other as they did, their hair and skirts flowing in the breezy spring breeze as they did so. Ryo then found himself blushing ever redder as he did so. "I wonder if I'll ever see them again?" he asked himself as his mother finally came out of the video store, grabbing hold of her son as the two walked back home. Chapter 6: Meeting Chikara A girl with a very ironic name, Chikara (Japanese for "power") Mikashi was one of the quietest, gentlest girls around. Her looks weren't special, either (at least not to her); her big, blue eyes were hidden behind a pair of fairly big glasses, and a few freckles dotting her face. She was also a little on the short side, measuring up to only a little more than 5 feet in height. And although she did have a skinny, somewhat body, her breasts were barely more developed than girls 5 years her junior. About the only physical trait she was proud of was her short, slightly curly brown hair, which she always made sure to maintain for the ongoing public. However, she did have one credit to her name; she was the only daughter of the owner of the town's only sports stadium. As such, Chikara was fairly rich, given what she wanted whenever she wanted. Still, it didn't seem to make her happy, nor did it make her many friends (at least not true ones, anyway). Still, working at the stadium as a part-time worker of its hot dog stand, Chikara was given plenty of opportunities to watch various games for free, and got to check them out at places most people would pay a month's worth of salary to sit at. She did enjoy the time she spent there, especially when she got to sit in the special reserved seats with her parents and older brother, and when she got to talk to and even at times hang out with some of the players, including some guys from local high schools! Those days of family togetherness weren't as often as they used to be, though, and Chikara often found herself running the stadium with just her and her brother calling the shots! That was quite a bit of responsibility for a 16 year-old girl. Now around 8 p.m. at night, Chikara was cleaning up the hot dog cart from the day's rush, selling quite a bit of hot dogs to the ongoing players, becoming a sort of mascot of the stadium to some of the regulars who attended the games. Still, the stadium seemed a little emptier recently..the combination of both television and Internet made the excitement of going to actual baseball games diminish greatly over the last couple of years, and it was starting to show in her family's pockets. Although still much better off than most of the town and, heck, most of Japan, Chikara longer for the days of crowded games full of cheerful, exuberant fans. Now 8:05 p.m. or so, Kiseki and Maki made their way to the stadium, being careful not to step on any cars or people in the parking lot as they approached ever closer. "Watch your feet, Kiseki. You already demolished one car today", her warned half-heartedly warned her, smiling as she said so. "Oh stop it! That was only one time", Kiseki angrily replied as they inched ever closer to the stadium. From the outside it was pretty big, at least 150 feet or so tall and over 300 feet wide (more than enough space to occupy the two giantesses). The outside colors of the stadium were pretty simple; a basic dark bluish color that was fairly similar in color to that of Kiseki and Maki's own school uniforms. The entry doors were located in the front, left, and right sides of the stadium, the doors about 10 or so feet high and about 15 feet long. Guarding the gates were security guards who dressed in grey shirts and pants, with red ties and black shoes to go with their uniform. As Kiseki and MAki stepped ever closer to the gates they were stopped by two of th guards of the stadium. "Stop!" one guard yelled. "The stadium's closed for today! Go home at once!" "Well, that's the thing. We're kind of....too big to go home. We want to talk to someone who works here.." It was at this moment in time that Chikara was alerted that trespassers had tried to enter the stadium. Putting down her apron and gloves, the girl (still in her school uniform, the same one as Kiseki's) ran to the front gates to see what was the matter. As she ran to the front gates, she found herself stopping upon making contact with Maki's right shoe, falling down to the ground. "Owww...!" the girl whimpered as she rubbed her right knee, which took a bump from the fall. "What did I just hit?" "Um....you tripped over my friend's shoe", Kiseki said to answer Chikara's question. It was then that the hog dog vendor looked up to see the two 50 foot tall girls in front of her, who just waved politely at the girl. "Excuse me, but do you work here? Do you know who runs this place?" Maki politely asked. "U-u-u-um...I-I-I'm th-th-the d-d-d-daughter of the m-m-m-m-man who r-r-r-runs this-is-is-is-is sta-sta-stadium....", Chikara slowly responded, practically hyperventilating at the sight before her. "M-m-m-my n-n-n-n-n-n-na-na-name is-s-s-s-......" "Is?" Maki rudely asked, looking annoyed by he slow response she was getting. "My name is Chikara Mikashi! Please don't hurt me!" the girl meekly finished up, bowing her head to the two giantesses, who silently laughed by her reaction. "Don't worry, we're not going to hurt you", Maki smiled as she lifted Chikara in the air, scaring the girl ever further. "We just wanted to ask you for a favor." "........and what would th-th-that b-be.....?" she asked as she gently put back down on the ground once again. "Can we stay here for a couple of nights or so? My friend and I can't stay in our houses because of our size." "Please, Miss Mikashi", Kiseki pleaded, bowing her head down to the girl. "We'll do whatever you want if it allows us to sleep here." Chikara decided to give this much thought. On one hand, she'd be letting two giant woman into her stadium, and who knows what kind of damage they could cause from something as simple as tossing and turning in their sleep. On the other hand, two beautiful, giant girls might just be the gimmick needed to attract more crowds of people. "I don't know...", she still was arguing with both herself and with Kiseki and Maki. "If my father finds out, or my big brother, they might be upset.." "Well, why don't you just ask them?" Kiseki pondered. "Because they're on vacation. My mother and I are running the stadium right now, and she already went home for the night. She told me and the security guards to lock up and go when we were finished up." "Pllllleeeeeaaaassssseeeeee", Kiseki asked once again, bending on her knees and bowing to Chikara. "All r-right", she finally caved in, like a mother to a child who really wants a cookie and gives it to him. "B-b-but just for one night....okay? SECURITY, PREPARE THE LIFT!!!" Kiseki and Maki watched as a gigantic forklift slowly made its way to the stadium, picking up each girl one at a time to the field below. The two found themselves kind of sitting on top of each other, too tall to sit sepearate from each other. "Well, how is it?" Chikara asked the two giantesses as they struggled to sleep on the ground below. "A little cramped, but not bad", Kiseki replied, "Thank you very much once again!" "A-a-actually...I-I-I w-w-was actually wondering if you two could do a f-f-avor for me?" "Hmm?" the two girls asked at once. "What would that be?" "Well....recently sales at the stadium have been....well, slipping. We really need a new attraction to liven things up. And...well...you see...." "You want us to attract people? Is that the gist of it?" Maki finished for the shy, flustered Chikara. "Y-y-yes..." "Okay!!" "Maki!!" Kiseki gasped in shock. "What are you saying!?" "Think of it, Kiseki. We'll become not only big in stature, but even be big when it comes to money in our pockets as well!" "Yes, I will pay you two very well if you should agree to do this. Um.....I didn't quite catch your names before.." "Oh, my name is Maki Kurosaki, and this girl to the left of me is Kiseki Sunohara." "Thank you very much, Miss Kurosaki and Miss Sunohara!!" Chikara told the girl, a bright smile on her face. "I hope you two can help my family and this stadium out!!" Chapter 7: Let’s make a deal! Night passed quickly for the two sleepy giantesses in the stadium, and thankfully they weren't loud sleepers either. As night passed and day broke anew, Chikara’s mother, Hana, was about to open the stadium so that the local high school team could practice. The woman, about in her mid-40’s or so, was even shorter than her daughter, only about 4 feet and 9 inches tall. Unlike her daughter, though, Hana had long, black hair and a fairly endowed chest, and her usual attire consisted of a green shirt and jeans, with small boots to go with them. Upon entering the building, the first thing Hana did was to see if anything looked out of place. A spill, a missing utensil at any of the food stands; anything that annoyed her, she wanted to know about. Thnakfully for her there wasn’t even so much as a single spill or mess to be seen, and as she walked down the stadium corridor to the field, she was about to find something she would never expected to see in her life. You see, when Chikara came home that night, she told her mother that she allowed some people to sleep over at the stadium, which infuriated her greatly. To get around this, though, she told her mother that the people in question were security guards who were watching over some expensive inventory recently sent to the stadium, because the idea of telling her mother about two sleeping giantesses would have fallen on deaf ears to her. Her mother would think she was crazy! As soon as she put her first food down on the stadium’s artificial turf, Hana was quickly greeted by a bright (though fake) smile by her daughter (who was dressed in a pink t-shirt and purple skirt that morning, along with a pair of pink shoes that matched the color of her shirt), who attempted to cover up Kiseki and Maki for as long as she could. “H-Hello, mother!!” Chikara blurted out loud and fast. “W-w-what brings you here so early?” “Well, today’s Sunday, is it not? There’s a high school baseball team coming over today to practice then play, so I need to get the field ready before they arrive in a few hours.” “N-n-nonsense, mother! I’ll take care of this! You just go home!” Chikara continued to nervously blurt out, trying to push her own mother out of the stadium. “Chikara, what’s going on!? Why are you acting so weird? And why are you being so loud?!” “N-n-n-no reason. No reason at all…” “What are you hiding from me, o daughter of mine?!?” Chikara gulped as her mother gave her a dark, cold stare, making her afraid to utter a single word to her inquisitive parent. “M-M-Mom, I have to s-show you something..”, Chikara sighed as she pointed to the center of the stadium, where two sleeping giantesses were cuddled on the field, sleeping like babies. “I don’t remember those balloons being here before”, Hana responded as Chikara looked at her with a long gaze. “Mom, those aren’t balloons! They’re real girls! Real, 50 foot tall girls!” “Chikara, stop pulling my leg! People can’t grow that high!” The commotion between the mother-daughter duo slowly woke up the two sleeping giantesses, who stretched their arms and legs as they slowly opened their eyes and realized where they were. “Oh yeah. We slept in a sports stadium”, yawned Maki, brushing her hair with her right hand fingers. “Good thing we told your grandparents you were sleeping at my house, Kiseki.” “I’m glad we did as well”, replied Kiseki as she stood up on her feet and stretched some more, Maki soon joining her. Either those are the most realistic robots I’ve ever seen, or this is the oddest sight I’ve seen in many a year Hana thought to herself, rubbing her eyes over and over again to make sure that what she was seeing wasn’t just a hallucination. “M-M-Mom, I want you to meet Kiseki Sunohara and Maki Kurosaki. They were the ones I told you of that were sleeping at the stadium….”, Chikara whispered in her mother’s right ear. “What!? You told them they could stay here?!” Hana replied, furious that her daughter would decide such a thing without her own consent. “Mother, think about it! Two tall, beautiful cheerleaders rooting for various teams day after day, and we could even have them perform acts and rides and other such things around the stadium.” “Hmm…now that you mention it, it does sound pretty nice…”, Hana whispered to her daughter in her right ear. “Tell you what, Chikara. They can stay if [unintelligible whispering]…….” “EH!?!?!” Chikara screamed in surprise by her mother’s suggestion. “What’s wrong, Chikara?” Maki asked of the girl. “M-M-Mother said you could stay if you tell her about you obtained your growth…and that I…gulp…join you in providing morale and other such services by becoming a giant as well.” “I don’t see why not. Right, Maki?” Kiseki asked of her friend, who already made up her mind long ago. “Sure thing!” Maki said to Chikara and Hana as she lowered her right hand to the ground, giving the two a thumbs up. As she did so, Kiseki took out the water bottle from earlier and showed it to the two stadium owners. “That’s it? THAT’S your secret to growth?” an unimpressed Hana muttered as Maki began to explain in further detail about it. “Well, it’s the water inside of it that causes the growth to occur. Chikara, be very careful around this stuff; even a single drop of water can cause something to grow to as much as 10 times its size, inanimate or not.” “Then why isn’t the bottle getting any bigger?” a curious Chikara asked the gigantic duo, who themselves were unsure of the reason. “I have no clue, honestly”, Kiseki answered, making a little, embarrassed raspberry as she did. “Does it grow clothes, too?” Hana asked Kiseki and Maki. “Yep! Though you should grow your clothes first, otherwise…”, Maki explained. “…they’ll rip as you grow?” Chikara answered, looking worried. Maki nodded in reply. “Well, I’ll go get us those cheerleader outfits we use in the fall when football teams play over here”, Hana told the three girls as she walked up the seats to her office, which was located near the top seats of the stadium. “Mother, I don’t want to become big!!” Chikara yelled as she began to cry a little. “I’m afrai…hmm?” Chikara looked down at her feet, noticing a little drop of water had touched both of her shoes. She watched as they ballooned in size before her to ten times their height. As she held her right foot up and put her hand in it, she was surprised by how much of her right hand she could fit in there! “Why did you make my shoes big, Miss Kurosaki?” Chikara nervously asked the two giantesses, watching as Kiseki slowly pulled her socks off from her feet and made them grow ten times their size as well. She then plopped them back on the ground, now looking like long, smelly towels to Chikara. “Why, silly, we’re making your clothes, and soon yourself, bigger!” Maki answered the normal sized girl’s question, looking both happy and a little evil at the same time. “Now we can start with growing your body now…” A loud scream was then heard through the stadium. So loud, in fact, that you could hear from the top seats even without a microphone.. To be continued.. Last edited by Silver Spoon; 09-04-2008 at 07:14 AM. Reason: Editing, removing links, etc. |
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Re: The Fountain of Growth
Wow. Ummm...Thanks. I guess.
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Re: The Fountain of Growth
I like it!
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Re: The Fountain of Growth
Love it. I hope to see some continuations!
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Re: The Fountain of Growth
she should have poured water on her feet first!, making them huge!
awsome story |
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Re: The Fountain of Growth
Very nice keep it up!
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Re: The Fountain of Growth
Awesome. Looking forward to future updates.
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Re: The Fountain of Growth
Not bad, I must say.
One thing I will say though is that the story has the exact same title from an old ZZZ story, so just to be on the safe side....I dunno, maybe a change of title? Might not be an issue, just a warning, since ZZZ does appear on these boards.
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Re: The Fountain of Growth
You're probably right about that. It's not exactly a title that grabs you (outside of using the word "growth" I suppose), and it's really something I just threw together very quickly. How about "Kiseki and Maki's Big Surprise", or something involving water? PM me ideas if you have any.
I wasn't expecting so much positive feedback, by the way. Thanks to all those who have left comments! Also, chapter 5 is up now on writing.com, for those curious (see the second link in my signature to proceed to it). Last edited by Silver Spoon; 09-03-2008 at 07:23 AM. |
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Re: The Fountain of Growth
So what will happen next?
Will they get even bigger? Will another girl join them? (Oh, please a cute, timid girl with glasses!) I also agree with the foot growth suggestion of my previous poster. |
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