Bad End - Nightmare of the Coven

DrMoreau · 02-13-2014

Despite the problems with it I've had a long term obsession with the Martin Mystery - Nightmare of the Coven episode and the idea of ugly green skinned witch TFs.

To that end, I spent all day today recutting the episode, to create an ending where the good guys do not win and everyone does not get transformed back.

Recommended: http://www.veoh.com/watch/v67930930yRS7cPYz

Alternate Link: http://www.movshare.net/video/496e8f6e85be7
(You will want to pause it and buffer, may run into issues with content on other sites. Works fine on iPad. Veoh does not.)

Runtime: 7:01

In my head the semi-zombieish witches just haven't quiet developed their new personalities yet and learned spells, and with enough time the changes would become permanent. This also explains why the ones who have been "witches" longer have more defined personalities and can appear human.

My... justification is that the mind still struggles while the body obeys, for a little while.

Feel free to post other witch/hag TFs. I know this might be an old bad stereotype, but I love it.

I would love feedback, I did spend all day on it, with numerous problems along the way.

DrMoreau · 02-13-2014

Just attaching the cover image.

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DrMoreau · 02-14-2014

Ugh, I gotta add my transitions back. But they were breaking the audio.
Edit: Transitions back, final version. I think.

hexen · 02-14-2014

I wish there was a bad ending for Summer Camp Nightmare... it got SO CLOSE to happening... if somehow Martin had miscalculated the alien lizard's power the ending would certainly be bad ^^. But I guess Martin Mystery is full of close calls.

rick404 · 02-14-2014

Pretty cool, that is a fun edit. Too bad the original episode did not featured witch Diana in action before they resolved the episode.

Nice to see this one again.

DrMoreau · 02-15-2014

That's what fan fiction is for, maybe. Very few have my obsession with this episode.

DrMoreau · 02-15-2014

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Originally Posted by hexen

I wish there was a bad ending for Summer Camp Nightmare... it got SO CLOSE to happening... if somehow Martin had miscalculated the alien lizard's power the ending would certainly be bad ^^. But I guess Martin Mystery is full of close calls.

Was just rewatching that. It could be done. Maybe. I would reverse some clips, because the transformations back are way more detailed.

obviousagent · 02-15-2014

I think its a great episode that had a lot of potential that wasn't fulfilled.
Do you know of any fan fiction out there relating to this episode?

DrMoreau · 02-15-2014

Quote:

Originally Posted by obviousagent

I think its a great episode that had a lot of potential that wasn't fulfilled.
Do you know of any fan fiction out there relating to this episode?

No, but I'd almost pay to have someone write it.

Of course, if I did so it would have to follow my alternate timeline.

hexen · 02-15-2014

Quote:

Originally Posted by DrMoreau

No, but I'd almost pay to have someone write it.

Of course, if I did so it would have to follow my alternate timeline.

I always wanted to do something with Totally Spies or Martin Mystery but my script had to do with werewolves and not witches... but meh might be a long time before I start to try and tackle TV shows simply because my character depiction isn't very good unless dialogue isn't involved and there are only simple scenes of people transforming into things --. But oh well, I'll certainly try to write something when I feel I'm ready for it.

DrMoreau · 02-16-2014

You know, honestly. I'd love to know see written the perspective from one of the girls affected. They are mostly open slates to be written without other show context, you know? That one with the headband (hadn't noticed till the cut) was like involved in almost everything. Like a right hand woman for Griswalda almost.

DrMoreau · 02-17-2014

So fan fiction style scenario that doesn't involve changing the ending.

Remember they only put her back in the ground, and she was raised by a very simple spell.

Martin and everyone leave.

The girl with the hair band misses her power, she was like her apprentice, her heart already and permanently corrupt. Maybe a few more for a coven like thing, but it could be just her.

They raise Griswalda (Ms. Dorey) back up, and now noticing she drew the center's attention she casts a spell to keep the school shrouded in the future.

She begins to bill it as an exclusive boarding school, looking for girls with actually strong minds and wills, as they tend to break out of the zombie-like state sooner and make more powerful witches. That sort of breaks the trope a bit too.

They come to the school, are not immedietly turned, but instead the students enjoy the new girls for a bit, like freshmen hazing. They are prevented from outside contact.

The classes would be centered around evil magic, like a twisted Hogwarts, freaking these freshmen out.

Once they've gone through their hazing, or as they get closer to the truth, they are turned one by one, so their new attitudes can be rubbed in the other girls faces as they join the "other students".

Until they all are corrupted, ready to absorb their black magic training, and they get some new transfers into the freshmen class.

Eventually Griswalda will have enough fully trained witches to ensure the center doesn't bother them again, and reclaim Diana, who Griswalda is irked at loosing.

02-13-2014	#1
DrMoreau Process Disciple Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 1,169	Bad End - Nightmare of the Coven Despite the problems with it I've had a long term obsession with the Martin Mystery - Nightmare of the Coven episode and the idea of ugly green skinned witch TFs. To that end, I spent all day today recutting the episode, to create an ending where the good guys do not win and everyone does not get transformed back. Recommended: http://www.veoh.com/watch/v67930930yRS7cPYz Alternate Link: http://www.movshare.net/video/496e8f6e85be7 (You will want to pause it and buffer, may run into issues with content on other sites. Works fine on iPad. Veoh does not.) Runtime: 7:01 In my head the semi-zombieish witches just haven't quiet developed their new personalities yet and learned spells, and with enough time the changes would become permanent. This also explains why the ones who have been "witches" longer have more defined personalities and can appear human. My... justification is that the mind still struggles while the body obeys, for a little while. Feel free to post other witch/hag TFs. I know this might be an old bad stereotype, but I love it. I would love feedback, I did spend all day on it, with numerous problems along the way. Last edited by DrMoreau; 02-14-2014 at 08:56 AM.

02-14-2014	#3
DrMoreau Process Disciple Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 1,169	Re: Bad End - Nightmare of the Coven Ugh, I gotta add my transitions back. But they were breaking the audio. Edit: Transitions back, final version. I think. Last edited by DrMoreau; 02-14-2014 at 07:41 AM.

02-14-2014	#4
hexen Amateur writer Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 547	Re: Bad End - Nightmare of the Coven I wish there was a bad ending for Summer Camp Nightmare... it got SO CLOSE to happening... if somehow Martin had miscalculated the alien lizard's power the ending would certainly be bad ^^. But I guess Martin Mystery is full of close calls. __________________ Check out my FA site, I would appreciate the feedback. http://www.furaffinity.net/user/hexen109/ And may the TF fairy find you and make you rawr!!

02-14-2014	#5
rick404 Meddler Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Asteroid M Posts: 592	Re: Bad End - Nightmare of the Coven Pretty cool, that is a fun edit. Too bad the original episode did not featured witch Diana in action before they resolved the episode. Nice to see this one again. __________________ Extra Tsun, hold the Dere. arsnoctis404.blogspot.com Stuff on other sites: DeviantArt Pixiv Hentai Foundry

02-15-2014	#6
DrMoreau Process Disciple Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 1,169	Re: Bad End - Nightmare of the Coven That's what fan fiction is for, maybe. Very few have my obsession with this episode.

02-15-2014	#8
obviousagent Lurker Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 17	Re: Bad End - Nightmare of the Coven I think its a great episode that had a lot of potential that wasn't fulfilled. Do you know of any fan fiction out there relating to this episode?

02-16-2014	#11
DrMoreau Process Disciple Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 1,169	Re: Bad End - Nightmare of the Coven You know, honestly. I'd love to know see written the perspective from one of the girls affected. They are mostly open slates to be written without other show context, you know? That one with the headband (hadn't noticed till the cut) was like involved in almost everything. Like a right hand woman for Griswalda almost.

02-17-2014	#12
DrMoreau Process Disciple Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 1,169	Re: Bad End - Nightmare of the Coven So fan fiction style scenario that doesn't involve changing the ending. Remember they only put her back in the ground, and she was raised by a very simple spell. Martin and everyone leave. The girl with the hair band misses her power, she was like her apprentice, her heart already and permanently corrupt. Maybe a few more for a coven like thing, but it could be just her. They raise Griswalda (Ms. Dorey) back up, and now noticing she drew the center's attention she casts a spell to keep the school shrouded in the future. She begins to bill it as an exclusive boarding school, looking for girls with actually strong minds and wills, as they tend to break out of the zombie-like state sooner and make more powerful witches. That sort of breaks the trope a bit too. They come to the school, are not immedietly turned, but instead the students enjoy the new girls for a bit, like freshmen hazing. They are prevented from outside contact. The classes would be centered around evil magic, like a twisted Hogwarts, freaking these freshmen out. Once they've gone through their hazing, or as they get closer to the truth, they are turned one by one, so their new attitudes can be rubbed in the other girls faces as they join the "other students". Until they all are corrupted, ready to absorb their black magic training, and they get some new transfers into the freshmen class. Eventually Griswalda will have enough fully trained witches to ensure the center doesn't bother them again, and reclaim Diana, who Griswalda is irked at loosing.