what do you guys think part TWO!!

zabuzabotz · 01-24-2007

well i think im done now

please tell me what you think, note that this is my very first try ... be fair

with this done... im gonna practice more and more and eventually (after a lot of attempts) i have my eyes set on a BE story with maybe character development !! hoozah !

bigboy83 · 01-24-2007

nice man, can you make more like this?

jimi20 · 01-24-2007

i think it's pretty damned awesome.... fucking good work buddy

Prophet Tenebrae · 01-24-2007

Great stuff. Just as well you obeyed the advice of the masses and drew a BE sequence.

katheb · 01-24-2007

quite well for a first time =]

Weirdo · 01-24-2007

Awesome

Philcotv · 01-24-2007

Excellent! More of that and you'll be an "expert"! Already you're way ahead of most of us.

ZodiacX · 01-24-2007

Being constructive for once, may I point out her basic anatomy needs a little bit of work? Her arms seem too short for her height, but the length of limbs and hands *is* one of the hardest things to be able to draw properly, so its a minor gripe.
On another note: Good job!

Mr. Gun Happy · 01-24-2007

Awesome, that's one hell of a start. Keep it up. ^_^

Bareon · 01-24-2007

Are those ice-cream cones on her chest?..... Oh wait those are the nipples.... my bad.. Durrr.. but great drawing... Nya-haha!

The Lord of War · 01-24-2007

Awesome-o

Muhznit · 01-24-2007

Like ZodiacX said, she needs a bit of work on her body, but you at least have basics down. Not bad of a job!

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Prophet Tenebrae Prophet Of Darkness Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: UK Posts: 1,792	Great stuff. Just as well you obeyed the advice of the masses and drew a BE sequence. __________________ Female Transformation Chat! Female Transformation Uber Blog BE Story Club

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Bareon I'm not excited. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Viewing the stars of the future. Posts: 944	Are those ice-cream cones on her chest?..... Oh wait those are the nipples.... my bad.. Durrr.. but great drawing... Nya-haha! __________________ -BlueBerserker http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=254362 -- my Pixiv boobiez collection http://pixiv.me/baeron -- also works! 2x the links for 1x the page~! or somethin.

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bigboy83 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 323	nice man, can you make more like this?

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jimi20 Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 401	i think it's pretty damned awesome.... fucking good work buddy

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katheb Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 138	quite well for a first time =]

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Weirdo Lurker Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 19	Awesome

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Philcotv Process Fan Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: East coast USA Posts: 55	Excellent! More of that and you'll be an "expert"! Already you're way ahead of most of us.

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ZodiacX Ninja Ferret! Woosh! Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 801	Being constructive for once, may I point out her basic anatomy needs a little bit of work? Her arms seem too short for her height, but the length of limbs and hands is one of the hardest things to be able to draw properly, so its a minor gripe. On another note: Good job!

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Mr. Gun Happy ... Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 1,686	Awesome, that's one hell of a start. Keep it up. ^_^

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The Lord of War Process Master? lol what? Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NYC baby Posts: 902	Awesome-o

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Muhznit The Magical Mammary Man Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In my chair. ._. Posts: 1,171	Like ZodiacX said, she needs a bit of work on her body, but you at least have basics down. Not bad of a job!