New schoolgirl TG sequence

bacattack · 12-20-2007

Good comic. Very simple and straightforward, but that sometimes results in the best strips. And I liked the ending. Like all of reality just got altered in an instant, and we don't know why.

You do need to make the sudden loss and reappearance of clothes more apparent though. You almost lost me and I needed to go back and see what you meant by that.

12-20-2007	#12
bacattack Gentle BE/GTS/FMG FTW Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 369	Good comic. Very simple and straightforward, but that sometimes results in the best strips. And I liked the ending. Like all of reality just got altered in an instant, and we don't know why. You do need to make the sudden loss and reappearance of clothes more apparent though. You almost lost me and I needed to go back and see what you meant by that.